Book : Love Heals Sorrows

Written by: Sargun_swasanian

Genre: Fanfiction.

Reviewed by Pournu

Book stars:  4/5.

Ratings: 4/5

Cover Title and Description:

Let's begin with cover. You could be a bit more creative with your cover. You just put a collage of their pictures as a cover. Cover helps you in attracting more readers. I suggest you ask any of the graphic designers to make a cover for your book so that it's charm isn't lost due to the cover. A nice title as there is nothing else that matters other than love. Good job on the description so detailed and lovely ❤️. Definitely makes us wanna see their journey. Good job on title and description but you gotta work on your cover.

First chapter:

You did a good job on showing what is the priority of both the protagonist. While one carves for love and care the other decides to take it for granted to become successful in his goal. The way Swara does everything to please her mami and she being partial towards her daughter is a bit cliché but it's the truth. Well done on the first chapter. We feel sorry for Swara and Sanskar's parents. Let's see what happens next.

Characters:

The character sketch was nice.  The bonding between Swara and AYUSH is lovely. Kavita and mami bring in the unpleasant flavour to the story. Kavya and Swara's friendship is adorable 😍. And her mama being silent to avoid problems leaves us with a question why don't you fight for her?  Thanks for showing Kavya and Sahil in a positive way. The friendship between Swara and Sanskar is awesome ❤️.  Sujatha surely brings in the much needed humour and all the characters have played their role perfectly. Kavya and Arush are hilarious. The brotherly love Swara has for Sahil and he reciprocating the same is lovely. I am eager to see how the past unravels before Swara.

Grammar and Detailing:

You need to work on your typos dearie ♥️. Overall it was fine but there were some grammatical errors too. Do give a proof read so that you can avoid all these.

My view as a reader:

I would say it was your description that made me curious that I wanted to peek into the story. And I am not disappointed. It is a beautiful addition to my library 😊.  Family bondings are love. Kudos to you for taking the story in a way that the negative characters and situations have a very less impact and the love that is between them proves to be stronger. What happened to Sanskar ? This is the question looming on our head. All the best.

Conclusion:

A modern fairytale with a evil mami instead of step mother and a cruel step sister. Good job on the story. Keep writing more and more.

All the best.

Hope this helped you to improve.