Story : Love heals  sorrows

         Genre: Fanfiction

         Written by: Sargun_swasanian

          Reviewed by Pournu

         Ratings: 3.5/5
        
         Book star:4

Title , cover and description:

     Good job on choosing the title. It gives an idea of what the plot is about. Nice work on the cover but cover could be more creative. Just a suggestion. Nice lengthy description. You managed to pique your readers interest with your narration. Though the storyline sounds similar let's see what makes this book special.

First chapter:

Good work on first chapter 👍.  The kind hearted swara and the bond between Dada and swara both are portrayed well.  The friendship between swara and Naina is also adorable 😍. The quick thinking of swara is admirable. Overall a very good chapter. I would give you a 3.5/5 for the first chapter. Let's see what the story unfolds.

Character Development:

   I fell in love with your characters 😍 as soon as they were introduced except for the negative ones. Be it cute Amaya or arrogant Sanskar they are lovely. The way Swara is treated by her in laws is lovely. It's like a dream come true for every girl. The cute banter between swara and Sanskar is fun. It adds more beauty to the story.  Let's not forget the negative ones I felt Sharmistha should have supported Swara and had more backbone. You can't always take her for granted just because there is no one to question you.  Then there comes the evil Queen 😈 Mrs. Godadia  making others pay for the sins they never did . Let's take a look at the" puppet of the year" Mr. Godadia . You are allowed to have a daughter with another women and you expect your second wife to treat her with love but when the same thing is expected from you you just turn blind eye. So disgusting. Amaya uff so much cuteness. Thanks for her character ❤️ she is love.  The motherly warmth of Sujatha shows us she is ready to accept her as a daughter rather than daughter in law. The maheswari family as a whole is relationship goals man. Hope to see such families in reality too.  I would love to rate your characters a 4.5/5.

Plot and Story line:

Though the plot can be guessed through narration nothing prepares you for this beautiful journey.  You owned the story with your creativity good job on that. The story keeps getting better and better with each twist and turns. The plot had many unexpected twists which couldn't be guessed so you earn a serious edge over there. So for the story line and plot I will give you 4/5.

Grammar and Detailing:

Grammar adds beauty to your story. It intensifies the emotions that you are trying to portray and acts as a bridge between reader and story. You need to work on your grammar and one more thing that adds beauty to the story is punctuation. You need to concentrate on that too.  I saw some typos too, please make sure you proofread so that you avoid them.  It could use some detailing too.  So for grammar and Detailing I give you a 2.5/5.

My views as a reader:

I love joint families ❤️. You took my heart 💓 with the way you portrayed maheswari family. A beautiful family oriented story is always a comfort read. I loved the protective Sanskar and possessive Swara. Amaya adds light moments to the story. It defines the relationship in a best possible way.  The way their love blooms is incredible. Literally from strangers to soulmates.
At the same time other family members also help in shaping up the story nicely.
It is aptly titled as love heals all sorrows. This is too good to be true.

Conclusion:

A dream family for every girl who leaves her family and enters a new one. Being there for each other is the best feeling in the world ❤️ be it your family or soulmate or your friends.