Title: Glitter Sinks

                                                                    Genre: Teen Fiction

                                                                    Written by: panickedsociety

                                                                    Reviewed by: pournu

                                                                    Ratings: 4/5

Book star: 4

Cover , Title and Description:

A unique cover same as your description. Yet you manage to make it interesting with the two line description. A face off with queen bee is always interesting. To break the stereotype is always difficult. Lets see how Micah Carters succeeds in it. I would like to appreciate you for the title. Its so unique and captivating.

First chapter:

The vivid description of high school parties along with lola's sarcasm is a hit. She cares for her friends but doesn't let it slip past her facade. To kiss a stranger just to get back to her Ex and her reply to the stranger  fits her role of queen bee perectly. Her attitude is savage. 

Character Development:

 You have assigned faces for each character and have included the playlist too which is nice. It is always easier to connect to story if you have faces for the character in the book. I love the bonding of friends. She obviously has a upper hand but still she cares for them in her own way. The friendship between Carla and Micah is nice. I love his mom and sister. Especially Harlow.  With the description from Micah and the last conversation makes us hate Kaden.  

Plot and Story line:

Though the clash with school's queen bee is common but the reason for clash is interesting. The story line highlights that Micah is determined to stay in the elite school. A struggling scholarship student with a revenge and a queen bee with a facade but they have a common similarity i.e. aversion for drugs. Hope Micah is able to break her facade or atleast look past it to understand the real lola. The flustered Lola is interesting. Let's see who wins.

Grammar and Details:

I didn't find any errors in sentence formation or any typos. I could find certain phrases that were new and that shows your vocabulary. Thanks for the new knowledge. Loved the fact that you started giving explanation for the phrases which will make it easy for us to understand.  As a reader plot initially was a little cliche but the turn of events made it interesting. I would like to give you 4.5/5 for your vocabulary.

My view as a reader:

As a reader when U think of school queen bee the thought comes to mind is that she being a bitch to others. But thanks for making Lola a different from other fictional queen bees. Enough about Lola lets come to Micah. He is someone you would like to be your friend. The reaction on seeing the elite school  along with vivid description shows his irritation and the fact that it is a total different environment for him to adapt to. The fact that it hurts Lola when her friends doesn't understand hurts Lola though she doesn't let it show on her face. A caring mother and a douche big brother made Micah more grown up and responsible than his age.The twists and plots keeps the story interesting. Lets see who succeeds or do they end up falling for each other.