Title: Broken

               Genre: Fanfiction

               Written by : CristinaMiru1

               Reviewed by:Pournu

               Ratings: 4/5

               Book star: 4/5

Title cover and Description:

  One word titles always manages to get the attention of readers. So good job on choosing the right title. A good cover always adds beauty to the story so good job on that too but the cover could be more creative just a suggestion.  A detailed description acts as a catalyst in making the reader to check out the book and that description is spot on. You get brownie points for that beautiful description alone. So overall a good job in choosing title and writing the description. So I give you a 4/5 for your cover and Description along with the title.

First chapter:

Let's consider prologue and chapter 1 together as the first chapter of the book.  The bitterness of Draco molfoy and the ever vile Lucius Malfoy are portrayed nicely. The motherly love makes her do crazy things like approaching the war hero to help her son. The disgust that Harry has for the Malfoy family is clearly evident. Narissa Malfoy comes out as a bit selfish when it comes to her son. Let's see what is her response?  So for the first chapter I would give you 3.5/5.

Plot and Story line:

An interesting plot. Not everything goes back to how it was before war. Scars become a part of you both physical and emotional scars become your companion. The frustration and fear of Draco is portrayed well. The ever strong Hermione Granger also has fears . The concerned friends are lovely ❤️. Enemies to friends and then blooms the love between the mortal enemies.  Draco and Harry's friendship was also wonderfully portrayed. Ron and Blaise add lighter moments to the story. So for this wonderful plot you get 4/5

Grammar and Detailing:

I would say good choice of words and you gave us a feel as though it's our journey alongside them. I couldn't find any grammatical errors but found a few typos do have a look. So that it becomes a more beautiful journey. So as far as grammar is concerned you did a very good job. Overall a good book almost flawless. Keep improving and keep writing more. So you get a 4.5/5.

My view as a reader:

The narration itself made me curious to have a look at your book. The friendship between the three 😍 is portrayed well. The musings of both Hermione and Draco was well portrayed. The inner struggle they are having was described in a very easy way to get to the readers. Nothing remains the same yet you have one another to heal you.  Nothing prepared me for this journey with twist and turns. You just get a big applause for the beautiful innocent confession from Draco and Hermione. It was a beautiful journey ❤️ from enemy to friends to soulmates. One of the best  happy endings.

Conclusion:

Though the book was based on Draco I loved Hermione more. Thanks for the headstrong female protagonist. Friendship and love ♥️ go hand in hand in your story. Ron and Harry being friends with Draco was nicely done. All the banters were fun . Overall a very nice book love with scars is even more beautiful. Keep up the good work.