Title: A blessing in disguise.

Genre: general fiction

Written by: Namikisbae

Reviewed by: Pournu

Ratings:4/5

Book star: 4/5

Title cover and Description:

With the title as vague as that you get our minds racing as to what might the blessings be. So your title gets the job done by capturing our interest. Let's take a look at the cover. It's been edited well but could be better. The colour combination wasn't that great but edits were good their faces could use a bit more clarity though. Description is detailed and spot on. It definitely piques our interest in taking a sneak peek at your book and explore the journey that is definitely going to be interesting. So for the title cover and Description I give you a 3.8/5.

First chapter:

The choice of title wasn't expected. That definitely has my interest now. Married and to go to office next day how much of a workaholic are you ? Well done on presenting the unhappy man and his frustrations in a nice way. Poor guy is surrounded by selfish women in his life. I liked the way you characterised people in his p o v rather than a character sketch. That was new. Those emotions were raw and I could feel his frustrations through your words. So that means you are successful in getting an emotional connect with your audience in the very first chapter. Well done. So ignoring the typos and errors only for your creativity and flow of emotions I give you a 4/5.

Plot and Story line:

The plot is not new but the story line is somewhat interesting. I loved the way things take place. Emotions at peak insecurities clearly evident and the loss of your best friend 💔, I could feel all that. With every passing chapter I fell more and more. But that ex girlfriend twist was shocking. But the end result was hilarious. Thanks for the wonderful work. I am glad I got a chance to review it. So you get a 5/5 for the plot and Story line of chashmish and sumo.

Character Development:

   There was no proper character sketch but those flashbacks and meetings did justice in introducing the characters. Each had a role to play and somehow it came out beautifully. But my most favourite character apart from the protagonist was the father of chashmish who stood by his daughter when his son was wrong. That man inspired me the most. Having lost her parents at an early age this man stood as the pillar of support and made her smile inspite of the sadness.  An ex turning into best friend was new and refreshing. So you get a 4/5 for your characters.

Grammar and Detailing:

The vocabulary you used in the description was good. I was hoping to see more of that. But there were grammatical errors and typos. Do correct them. The language used was also easy to read. No complicated words. There is a room for improvement and also it could use some detailing too. So for grammar and Detailing I give you 3/5.

My view as a reader:

As a reader, my first thought was this is gonna be an after marriage love cliché stories but you proved me wrong. The twist and turn of events made it a fun ride. Never expected her to be the childhood sweetheart that he lost. Pushkar was also a cute addition. I loved that guy ❤️. He made the story funny with his antics. It was a good romance read. Thanks for making the female protagonist strong and sassy. Awkward malhotra was a sight to behold. I felt like they were a part of my daily life. Once again thank you for creating such a fun filled and emotional ride.

Conclusion:

It was my absolute pleasure to read this one innocent yet romantic journey. The way you shaped up the female character. Thanks for not giving much importance to the negative characters. Overall a good plot and Story that you could read sitting by the window sill.