Title: Field Trip 

Genre: Short Story

Author: @mann101978

Judge:popololo3006

Cover/Title: The cover is basic. It could have been better honestly.  You can add a few more edits and stuffs. You could have added a garden in the background the wands could have been a part of them .The title though is good. I like it but you could have used some better one . It would be a 1.5/2 for me.

Description: I liked the description , it gave away the summary of the story . You could have used the dialogues of Hermione and Draco to make it more interesting. I liked the questions you added, it makes a reader more interested . You did a good job at it .For me it would be a 0.7/1 

Storyline: Number of words was good. Grammatical errors/mistakes-very few. 

Flow of story-Good 

It's a good story and I believe the script was really good , you added humour also in it I believe it was a good book where scenes were not stretched much .

You very well expressed Draco's fear and Hermione's determination to help him 

 It would be 1.8/2 for me.

Total: 4.5/5

Book star: 4

Wish you luck and love