Title : The Modern Tale of Cinderella.
Author : snowcrystal-
Judge : MeetShah464

Cover & Title: The cover does look pretty good and it stands out to the story as one would expect . The title of the story tells pretty much about the story as well.

Grammar : The grammar was on point and perfect. It was difficult to find mistakes there. So, a good job there. Although, it lacked minor punctuation mistakes but it can be worked upon.

Plot Originality and Character Development : The story was  quite original and really interesting to read. It somehow lacked some more content to justify the point being raised here. The flow of the story was good and supported the topic but turned out to be a bit male-bashing towards the end. The story had a good mesage to it and some of the points were really good. Since there were no characters in the story, it lacked cliffhangers and character development in it. But overall it was a good story which justified it's plot.

My Review : 4/5.5