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Sacrifice - A Tribute to Doctors

Title : Sacrifice - A Tribute to Doctors
Author : Nandi1103
Judge : MeetShah464
Genre : Fiction

Cover and Title : The cover was good enough, thought not up to the mark, but was good. The title really matched the story and the plot.

Grammar : There were some grammatical mistakes, which kept on going throughout the story. There were a lack of punctuations in many parts of the story. Some words were used from different language, i.e. Hindi, which was fair but needed proper translation for the non-Indian origin readers. The overall grammar was fine, but needs to be worked upon.

Plot originality and Character development : The plot of the story was well written. It had an originality which made the story more interesting. There was a phase in the story where two of the characters die, which was a bit rushed but it didn't affect the later part of the story which really helped the story to be on its original track. The characters should have been described in a more precise way. The character development was done in a pretty good way, but  it needs some improvisation there.
The overall plot of the story was pretty good and shows how doctors have been the pillars of the society during this pandemic.

My rating : 3.5/5.5
Book star:3

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