Title : Predestined
Author : 000_aamira
Judge : MeetShah464
Genre : Fiction

Cover and title : The cover wasn't up to the mark but was good enough. It needs some more improvement. The title on the other hand felt appropriate for the story as it was clear that both the characters were destined to be together  even before they knew about it.

Grammar : There were very few and  minor grammatical mistakes that can be worked upon. Overall the grammar was good and the punctuations well used.

Plot Originality and Character Development : The plot of the story was pretty intense and that showed it's originally from the beginning. The characters were described well but there are still some loopholes between the character and the reader. The characters must be described properly so that the readers are totally familiar with them.
The characters were well developed throughout the story, be it in the sense of maturity or growth, it was done pretty well. The only place where the story lacked was at the end. The end was felt a bit rushed and sudden. The plot where the past was being shared was quite emotional, but at some level it felt like it should have been more descriptive so that the readers could totally connect with it. The message is well received in the end by the reader, which ultimately becomes a win for the writer.

My rating : 3.8/5.5
Book star:4