Book name:- you are My world

Genre:- fanfiction( one shot)

Written by Words_Do_Matter

Reviewed by mahaenterprises

Rating:- 3.5/5

Book star:- 4/5

Cover, title, description:- cover is nice and apt for title, but I think the font can be changed and use some other creative one. Title is nice, but it’s common one, I suggest you to think something ore creative. But when I read the story the title made emotion, the boy saying this to his parents, which is good. Description is so short and sweet, you describe mother love and children in one line which is so sweet.

Characters:- in this story you mentioned characters separately but reading the story and seeing cover we can understand it revolves around shivika and his son, a family story. In parents life children play a very important role, The little boy role was important in the parents life, for him both are in this relation without love and commitment. All role given equal importance, good one.

First chapters:- first chapter show the daily routine of mother and child. Always in morning mother have this difficult job of waking up her child. Relation between both are so good, the boy in this age is so mature, and possessive for his mother. Even his conversation with his father, he made his father realise about his behaviour towards his mother, which is good as you described in child are Healer. Between you made us to think about the relation shivika share, there is no love or commitment in this marriage. Shivvay ignore Anika.

Grammar:- throughout the story I didn’t see any grammar mistake, good. They was you describe things, were so beautiful. Some places I got confused but reading again I got it. It’s nice work you written dialogue in separate font and narration in different font.

Plot and story line:- plot is good one, but actually story we can understand in last only. But I bit confused why shivika got married, you mentioned about Anika sister died but you fail to mention why the married. Is Anika sister died, or etc. Please look after it. The story was in flow in first chapter but in second I got confused about shivika marriage.

View as a reader:- I got interest in reading description and first chapter, the little boy made his father understand his mother importance. But in two chapter, I got confused why shivika married, you mention about Anika sister but you didn't mentioned she died or not. Anika married him for his son, mainly I had doubt it’s their son or shivvay or Anika sister son. Some doubts in had between the story. Lastly the boy confessed he loved both as they are his  world. But I think you must have added shivika realisation too. They only talked other then that they did not do anything. I think you should look after second chapter, many doubts need to be clear. I hope my review helped you , please look after the points in mentioned. All the best for your future story.