Book name- Madauri to Mumbai

Genre- Fanfiction

Author- prabhagpvF4

Review-JuhiMehta268

Rating - 2/5

Book star- 2/5

Title

I have a mixed opinion about the title it's not that bad but it wasn't that intriguing enough to catch the attention of the readers. The title is an important aspect of any book and here the title wasn't very unique.

Cover

You seriously need to work on your cover as the cover wasn't attractive at all. Cover is the second most important thing which attracts the readers after your blurb here it was way to ordinary. In my suggestion you definitely need to change your cover.

Blurb

As I said earlier blurb is very important it's the base of any story. Here there was no blurb just one line or two. So add something which can attract the readers to read the story.

First chapter

The first chapter was fine it gave us  the idea about how story gonna proceed further.

Plot

The plot was good manik lives in Mumbai and Nandini lives in Madurai and the story was about how they meet and there relation starts but the plot was lacking the creativity . You need to work on the creative side of the story also.

Characterization

You have given brief character sketch of every charcters thats the good thing for a readers to know about the characters. But you could have explained there feeling and emotions much better as a reader I was not very much connected with them.

Grammar

There were no such grammatical mistakes but ya there were many spelling mistakes so the book need some editing.

Flow

Flow was moderate. Its look like you were rushing you could have taken some breaks and explained there emotions and feeling in detailed way to connect with the characters.
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My personal opinion

The plot was really good but you just need to work on your writing skills and creativity and it will be perfect. Don't take this review as negative feedback just work on the points mentioned above and it will be fine.