Book name - It's Always you

Genre- Fanfiction

Author- Jade_S4M

Rating- 4.5/5

Book star- 5/5

Title

Picking of the title is the most difficult thing for any writer. But here, in wattpad there are so many stories with this same title but you seriously managed to win my heart. The title was perfectly going with the story. It was sweet and smile.

Cover

Cover was fine, but not that appealing enough to attract the readers.

Blurb

Blurb is the base of any story as it is what attracts the readers towards the story. Here the blurb of your story was good and eye catchy and as a reader it definitely makes me to press the read button.

Prologue

The prologue was very interesting . I liked the scene which you used in the prologue . It made me curious to read the story further.

Plot

I loved the storyline it was sweet and simple with it's own twists and turn.

Charcters development

Charcter sketch was there so it was good to get connected with them.I liked the Kang Marie character very much her emotions and feelings was explained amazingly, the emotions were on point when she was way best friend Sehun, as a reader I was connected with her character even the other characters were given equal importance they had there own part in the story which was really good. So well done.

Grammar

You have a good vocabulary. Personally I didn't find any grammatical mistakes.

Flow

Flow was nearly perfect just in some chapters, I feel it was going fast but overall it was good.

My personal opinion

I seriously loved your story. You managed to pen down it very well and it is definitely commendable. So great work. All the best.