Cupid Cat
This is the review for the book Cupid Cat
By MsCrysaniaMajere
The cover of the book looks fine, although I think it could use some minute changes. Like the alignment of the second picture and there's something written in Chinese/Japanese on top. After reading the description I realised it's borrowed pictures.. but I still think there's room for improvement. The description is short but it did make me want to read your book. It can make a reader curious to know what's inside.
After reading the first chapter I was really curious to read more. Your sentence formation and grammar usage is proper. I found the story to be something new. I have never read anything from a cat's point of view. I loved the concept behind it. The way you express the cat's thoughts in the first chapter was really nice. The only thing I found to be incomplete was the humans part of the story, in the sense, I feel the love story could have been processed better. It just feels incomplete. They just fall in love all of a sudden out of nowhere. That's just my opinion.
I would rate this book 4.5 out of 5
Book star: 4
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