This is the review for the book Always Together Forever by Love_u_cid

The cover of the book can use sone changes as it's really difficult to see the male lead in it. I think you should use another picture of them where they are shown clearly.. The description is bad. After seeing the cover of a book, readers usually read the description and form a view of the book, in other words, judge the book. I have no idea other than the fact that it's supposed to be a cute emotional love story based on 'dareya' whom, I had to google to know who they are, no offence. You should describe the book in a short and interesting way so that the users are attracted to try your book.

Honestly, I felt that the story can get better. You've some silly grammar and spelling mistakes. It's as if you never read the whole thing after writing. For instance, instead of 'propose' you've written 'purpose' and I know for a fact that you know the correct spelling cause you've used it once. But then other than that one time,all other times you've used the wrong spelling. There are some grammatical mistakes too. The story is a really cute yet cheesy story. There are times when I read it and a smiled formed on my lips remembering the serial I used to see when I was small. I would strongly recommend you to edit your story and reduce the usage of emojis. You should use your writings as a way to make them understand what the characters feel. Usage of emojis doesn't give the same effect, I say this because it just made me feel that the story was written by someone who's immature and needs to work hard on their writing. No doubt the story is sweet,cute,cheesy and brings a smile to your face, I still hoped for a better experience. I hope you edit your book and try again.

I would rate this book 1.5 out of 5

Book star: 2