The night stars cried by LadyHanaOfL

First of all I would like to give this author a big kudos because her general writing skill is very good.

When I say writing skills, I mean a way of writing, her punctuation, and the ability to captivate one with writing

Although it was nicely written they were a lot of grammatical mistakes which I'm guessing is due to the fact that the writers first language is not English

Since the story contains about five chapters only, I wasnt able to read more and ses how she can lay a plot.
The five chapters were more like revealing chapters so it was like ths story had not started
Generally I think you are doing good tho

I would rate her 2 out of 5
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Book star: 2