Journey of life is a book written by AkshaKala

I most say that the book has a very good cover. A very attractive one at that.

The description of this book written by the author is a bit boring if I may say and lifeless
As a writer you should be able to captivate people through the description of your book.
Make them eager to read it.
I know it's not easy but if you have a passion for it, you just have to try always.
Also there are a lot of wrong spelling in this work.
It needs a lot of editing.
And to be very Frank it is written in an odd manner which makes it difficult to read and understand
I also think it is too sloppy.
I dont seem to understand were the story is heading
It seems to me like lazy writing
I really hope you'd adhere to this corrections and do better
But over all I think the greatest step to writing is starting
You are doing well.
I rate it 2 out of 5