“What About Us”
By: llMesianll

★ Cover: 4.5/5- The cover is pretty, but the woman on it is almost too in your face. Since Liam and Venus are both main characters, I would include him on the cover as well. (With his pretty looking ass 😂)

★ Description: 10/10- Excellent description, it pulled me in instantly and I became hooked.

★ Grammar & Punctuation: 19/20- there is an over use of commas which lead to some run on sentences. Use periods in some places instead of commas, your grammar is wonderful.

★ Originality: 5/5- Your story is 100% a unique and original idea.

★ Character Development: 19/20- I can't express how much I love Liam. All of the characters are like everyday friends and so relatable. I also love Venus, she's adorable and someone I would besties with. You should slip their features into the first chapter when they are introduced, not everyone goes by the cast list.

★ Plot Development: 20/20- The plot flows wonderfully, I really enjoy how detailed everything is. The story also has  perfect pacing and stays in the same tense which makes for a smooth read.

★ Overall Look: 10/10- Wonderful, simply wonderful. From the color scheme of the cover to the flow of the vocabulary, it is wonderful!

★ Enjoyment: 10/10- I would give this a 1000/10! I freaking love this book so much I had to make myself stop reading to cook dinner!!

★ Total: 97.5/100
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★114.5 points★

♥Video attached is Jagged Edge - "Promise” ♥

Thanks for requesting a review mama, I absolutely love this book sooo much!!!