Book name: Love letter to my scarlet

Written by: Anusara12
Judged by: anu_champ

Title :

Hey, your title is an interesting one. Making the readers curious to know what is stored for them in the book. But I would say the whole book is in scarlet's POV then dont you think it will be more suitable if it is LOVE LETTER FROM MASON. Just a thought. Do give it a thought about it.

Cover :

The first thing that attracts people to books is the covers. Your cover is too simple and I dont find it anywhere near portraying the title.

Description :

I would like to appreciate you for this part. The description is too intriguing to ignore. It is well written increasing the curiosity of a reader.

The beginning :

You have closed the start with simple few words. You didn't give a clear view of scarlet life after her breakup or something which I would say is off to the story.

Detailing :

I would say the way you presented the detail of the story was not up to the mark. Maybe you could have briefed the flashback with more precision is what I felt.

Character development: In the end the way you portrayed scarlet was nice. But the eagerness was not shown properly. Eagerness to read further letters, to reach him somehow reduced by a bit. Mason's character was not highlighted in the proper way is what I felt. If you could have shown his pain, struggle it would have been a plus.

Grammar :

I really appreciate your grammar. Perfect without mistakes.

Plot :

This is actually an interesting and amazing plot. The way you portrayed was really good but it could have been better if you had shaped it more.

3.4/5