Book name: Another Hopeless Love Story

Written by:djgraves01

Reviewed by:anu_champ

Title:

Though the title seems a regular one it perfectly fits the plotline.

Cover: That's a cute cover. But I think it could be much better. It would be better if you can change the font color as the love story isn't visible clearly.

Description :

It was okay. Not as intriguing as it could be.

The Beginning :

It was definitely an interesting start to the book. Not like some routine start but with different presentations and also with the insta post in between is cute.

Detailing :

You didn't go on with explaining each and every aspect like their costumes or places etc which all do. That seems to be different and nice but then that also causes a little confusion at times in the story. I really liked your idea of adding this post and comments thing which I found really new.

Character development :

The introduction of characters impressed me and the way they react in situations did feel realistic but then the drawback I felt for both of them is the misunderstanding caused based on the same topic called jealousy... Once it's acceptable, twice okay but I guess you showed it thrice the same reason for their breakup which really dont seem to strengthen the character's personality and reaction to a particular situation.

Grammar :

It was in simple English which is quite comfortable for many readers. Except for few minor mistakes for using him in place of her and vice versa, everything seems good.

Plot :

The plot is a common topic but the way of presentation depends on which I feel to an extent u were successful but then I feel you could have made it much better.

3/5