Client: DaniBrull

How it felt like when I was reading your book:

TITLE

I really like the name Willow Hills. I feel like it suits the story perfectly because ironically, it holds birth and death at the same place. However, it lacks some kind of pop in it. Since it is one of the most important places in your book, try changing it into something that could lure the readers immediately.

Example: Willow Hills Cemetery 

BLURB

Your blurb was fabulous! I honestly was a little scared when I saw Ghost Story xD, it's not something I like reading. But Statues?!?! That was incredible. 

However, the mention of Bipolar disorder was a major spoiler. It seems like the readers already know the reason for her death. I suggest removing that sentence so that the readers would ponder why she died in the first place. 

Another suggestion is to put the 'A Ghost Story with neurodiverse rep' in the end. Begin the story with statues coming to life. That is going to instantly attract the readers.

Remember, this is just my point of view. You are free to write in whatever way you wish. ♥

COVER

It's very beautiful and charming in its own way. The fonts are very beautiful. The stickers are in the right place. The calligraphy is easy to decipher so I think you did a fantastic job at that!

PLOT AND GRAMMAR

Statues coming back to life? Mysterious death? Fighting with death too? Dayum

To be honest, I really couldn't really find any errors at all! It seems like I was given quite a well-polished novel from a book store and I am just genuinely interested in the book. 

The descriptions were just spot on! It didn't feel like loads of information was being dumped into the story. They were strung with very beautiful words. I could literally picture the entire book in my head. 

In case you didn't notice, I went straight to the last chapter only because I badly wanted to know how it was going to be like in the end.

I just couldn't stop myself.

Perhaps, my only issue is the length of each chapter. Since I use the web, I see that each chapter is at least 12 minutes long, whereas a normal chapter would be only 9 minutes. 

It's just my opinion of course. But remember, More chapters = More Votes.

OVERALL

It was really wonderful to read this book. The fact that Jason blames himself for the death is going to have a really big impact on the plot. Quinn and Greta are more like siblings too xD It's wonderful to see how well they adjust to each other.

Again, this review is just my opinion.

I apologize if it isn't to your liking.

I wish you good luck with your book, DaniBrull ♥