CHILDREN OF THE DARK DWELLING
Client: maiantheia
How it felt like when I was reading your book:
TITLE
Perfect! The title at a glance screams horror and fantasy, so you hit the jackpot on that!
BLURB
Thrilling. There were no spoilers in the summary. The first sentence is eye catching and is definitely doing a good job in luring readers. It was like watching a scary trailer in my head and I absolutely loved it!
COVER
The picture chosen is fantastic. The cottage and the dark forest seems to be the most appropriate for a cover like this and the dark themes and banners used in the book are a very good match. The author's name and the title are clearly visible. It would have been more eye catching if the font of the title were written in a spooky font, but that's just me nitpicking.
PLOT
Honestly, I did not find a single error. I had to actually force myself to stop reading because it was just simply so amazing. Even the descriptions seem to flow like magic. I am not even looking for errors, I just can't wait to click on the next chapter and see how this is all going to end.
OVERALL
You have a mind blowing ability with words and I really wish that you get the time and resources to finish. This is actually my first horror story and it's brilliant. I can actually feel the thrill in my body when I am reading your work and it's an amazing ability for a writer to instil that feeling in a reader.
I wish you good luck in your works! maiantheia ♥
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