Author: sisofthedevils

1. Title:

The title is perfect. Nothing to correct. Simple and effective and eye-catching. It's my taste of title.

2. Blurb:

The blurb would also catch my attention because it established the chemistry between the main characters. And I can't tell they are going to have an interesting chemistry. The female lead stood out here. I automatically could tell that she's not cliche. Smiling for cameras, giving others less attention, bold comebacks. I like this character genuinely speaking.

Now your blurb isn't like a published novel's blurb. But that doesn't matter tbh imo. You'll get Wattpad readers attention and the goal of the blurb is accomplished. Think practicality not normalcy.

3. Characters:

Loved the anti-hero main character. Amazing character choice. Non cliche is good here. I love how you reversed the genders of the new girl popular boy trope.

4. Plot:

I like the plot. I like your writing too. The writing complexity is perfect for your story's topic. You don't want to be writing memoirs for a high school story 😂.

But I must say the plot could be elevated. For your type of story, no need to make major changes to the plot. But put some plot twists.

5. Overall picture/enjoyability:

I would totally read this story completed. It's my style. You got all the main elements. Unique female lead. The fake boyfriend thing seems interesting. Now it's only up to your execution, meaning plot twists.

Good luck writing! ❤️