Highschool Love
By Mi_So_07

Cover: 5/5

Beautiful. It actually gives a fantasy romance vibe and is pretty decent.

Blurb: 3/5

Nah, girl! You don't write a blurb like that. You need describe your story a little more and use something intellectual to make it feel a little more. Your plot is simple, so your blurb has to be more orphic.

Chapter 1: 8/10

Except of the lack of vocabulary, your starting chapter was beautiful and I adore it. It was simple and to the point but, darling, it's a romance book and you have to keep it up with advanced metonymy and metaphors.

Vocabulary/grammar: 8/10

Your don't have any grammatical errors but your vocabulary is too little for the theme you chose. That's all you need to invest in your lovely book and you're good to go.

Character Development: 9/10

Good one.

Storyline/plot: 17/20

A typical romance story of two highschoolers like me and I know what they were feeling throughout the story. Simple and minimalistic romance. But it's a very common plot written for fanfictions.

It's okay, not all books have to be a very different one.

Enjoyment: 18/20

I enjoyed everything and could understand all of it but I crave for some majestic vocabulary.

Impression: 18/20

Not the typical fan of romance but I must say, it perfectly fits a Netflix teenfic. Good work!

Total=86/100

Hey there
I hope you didn't find anything too harsh.
I apologize for the delay and thank you for choosing me as your reviewer.
Have a great day.