Crossing My Heart
By dxxdly_

Cover: 3/5

The cover is minimalistic and who wouldn't like a smiling Taehyung, but, the story doesn't match with the cover. I wasn't attracted to it and would suggest you to change it. You can ask our in house editor, lippe890 or any other cover shop.

Blurb: 3/5

Small and precise. It was exactly to the point but that's not enough for a blurb. You have to be more vivid with the explanation.

How about, you write a little about how Jungkook broke Taehyung or either's lives.

Chapter 1: 9/10

Pretty good start but something felt left out. The wording for the emotions had a lesser impact on me.

Vocabulary/grammar: 9/10

A little improvement of words and you're good to go.

Character Development: 10/10

On point!

Storyline/plot: 17/20

Not very unique and quite mainstream. Although, it's okay since you had been hooked using your language.

Enjoyment: 17/20

Good job. I must say, I enjoyed it.

Impression: 17/20

I'm not the typical fan of this genre and prefer fiction. But I liked the simplicity of the book and can claim it perfect for a late night chill read. Just note the above mentioned points, and you'll be great! Good luck.

Total= 85/100

Hey there, I hope you didn't find anything too harsh.
Thanks for choosing me as your reviewer.