Dead Gifts
By Aestheticvip3012

Cover: 5/5

No doubt in that. KimGits is an amazing designer and it just tells the story perfectly.

Blurb: 5/5

Viola! Amazing is the only word I'm being able to say for it. Just the perfect suspense.

Chapter 1: 10/10

Both the beginning chapter and prologue are so beautifully explained, that I can die for a dead gift. The facial features of the nanny and the way, Taehyung was afraid of her... Aah! The face actually haunted my dreams that night, haha.

Vocabulary/grammar : 9/10

The vocabulary is perfect and honestly, more than what I expected. Although, I must shade some light over the punctuation error.

As much as correct tenses and words are integral in Grammar, punctuation make a hefty part of it.

That being said, some chapters missed the full stop and commas at place while some sentences started with lower case letters.

A proofread is suggested.

Character Development: 9/10

The story has just began and I haven't spotted a significant character development, which is supposed to improve with the increase in the intensity, but I must praise the basic character details.

Storyline/plot: 19/20

Not cliché, indeed. I have previously read some similar books but it's one in every 100 books, so we can let that pass. The fact that this is half vintage based and half modernized, is what gained my attention, the tittle being the best reason.

Enjoyment: 19/20

I seriously felt the rawness of the emotions and that sudden lump like feeling in the throat, a tremor in our breathing rate when suddenly a terrifying scene hits... Oof! Just amazing.

Impression: 19/20

Total=95/100

Tip: Keep the author's note, aesthetic and author pages before the prologue. The story must start with the prologue and significantly be followed by the first chapter. While spontaneous reading, unnecessary chapters in between the main content, loosens the interest.

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Lastly, I hope you didn't find anything too harsh.
Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer.
All the best!