The Blueties and the Beasts
By everydaydreamingxxi

Cover: 4/5

The cover is exactly relatable to the storyline. But I don't know why, it somewhat feels off. I suggest you to make the Beast figurine a little different and to lessen the saturation of the background.

Blurb: 5/5

Beautiful. The blurb was perfect and did not reveal much of the story. I was really intrigued into reading further.

Chapter 1: 8/10

The chapters are long and the pace was good. I liked how you introduced some of the Blueties along with Sergeant Jimin, the sapphire one. And before that you explained your theory of vaccination which formed the redties,yellowties,greenties and the blueties.

But as much as I liked it, at times I did not want to continue further. There were quite a many wrong placement of punctuation, especially the commas, which made it quite difficult to understand the feel of the sentence.

Vocabulary/grammar: 8/10

The vocabulary wasn't very high but exactly what the story needs. I liked the descriptive words.

But then again, you have to watch out for your commas.

Character Development: 10/10

This deserves a standing ovation. Very few portray Jimin as any general or Sergeant, primarily because he gives more of a posh vibe than rough.

But I liked how you managed to keep his real personality and the story character's personality in balance.

Still, Bhrea is my favourite.

Storyline/plot: 19/20

One word for it: Beautiful.

Enjoyment: 18/20

Except for the punctuation errors or some typos here and there, I liked the book.

Impression: 18/20

Total=90/100

Recommendation of the week

I hope nothing felt harsh
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