Marriage Tales

By UmmiAbdull
Review by Africanliterature

Book cover- I'd say it's okay but you can still get something better.

The story description is nice too.
Prologue: You didn't tell us whose POV it was. At first I thought we'd get to know the character later in the book but there was no reference to it then we later found out about her in chapter five(though you didn't indicate whose pov)

Certain words need to translated eg Chapter 5 Zinah, Subhana Allah
Chapter 7- Amarya na mu, mu ko na Allah
Chapter 8- Allahuma inee...alaihi

Lastly, two "chapter POVs

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Review on MARRIAGE TALES

By d_oyewole1
The book cover is nice. Same for story description.
Yes,the issues of knowing whose POV too.
I think that's all
More grease to your elbow👍🏼

*****

Marriage Tales

Review by Reine_Gh

I loved the description and cover

Content - I love how the story deviated from the characters in the prologue but it took long for me to know how she and Nabeela were connected.

The povs were a bit confusing I thought everything would be narrated from Nabeelah's Pov.

And then there's your use of the word "since from" I think its tautology to use both words in a sentence.

Just a few tweaks and it'll be bestselling worthy ✌🏽
A brief and translation of the intimacy dua would have been good

Besides that I loved everything about the story 😍😘.

Bigger you ✌🏽

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Review on marriage tales by myroseswillhuntyou

Description: The description of characters were good, I didn't spot much errors in the chapters, shows you read your work well before uploading them.

Please try as much to interpret some words there, not everyone understands some terms

The cover is good to an extent

Could you notify who is narrating by writing the character's POV at the beginning of the story?

I still owe you some votes, would get back to your story again.

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UmmiAbdull

by Finest_Wine

Cover- totally rhymes with the story, it's catchy.

Description - the blurb is intriguing, it got me hooked on a first look.

Content - the story line is nice. I like the way you pointed out the Islamic culture. The book is so African and realistic 100%

However, I think you should work on punctuation marks. For example your words in quote, there should be a punctuation mark before the quote indicating the end of the speech.

Further more, you should straighten out the first part of the first chapter, I was confused as to what was actually going on. Your work is nice, really creative thinking and _realistic_ as well ✨

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Marriage Tales by UmmiAbdull
Review by Jidderh_K

I loved your book cover and description, it totally fits the title.

The book content is amazing and I love your character buildup. The POV's are a little bit confusing as I couldn't differentiate between who and who.

I think you should try and translate the Hausa to English maybe in brackets or at the end of the chapter, for the sake of readers who do not understand Hausa.

A little bit of editing would make the book perfect 👌🏽

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By MariskyWhite

Great cover and the description is good.

Content_ the storyline is good. A little bit of typos and you need to work on your punctuations.

Finally, you need to work on your POVs

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My review on Marriage Tales by Ummiabdul.

By Alzara202

I love your cover it resonates with the story and gives a clear indication as to what the story is about.

Your content is great! I absoluted loved the character development and how well written your characters are and your storyline is very interesting but you need to work on your typos and your POVs are a bit confusing because I think you need to work on giving more direct POV so we know which character it is other . than that great work! 😀 I actually still need to vote on some chapters 🤔

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Banyamlenge

Great cover and a good description you got there!

Content
You got a great story there and given that its your first book you have it girl so Go! Go! Go!

Work on typos and make clear of the POV.

I'd like to read it to the end!

Keep up!

That's all from my bench.

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MARRIAGE TALES .

blisslicious

he book. I love it. I liked the pacing of the story. Lol I do watch pj mask too with my nephew.

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