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suddenly the doorbell rang nd neil went to open the door . as soon as he opened the door neha engulfed neil in a bone crushing hug . neil also hugged her back with love . then three of them're  ( shweta neha nd neil ) walking inside the house . they were busy in chitchating when avni also reached there . she started smiling seeing her family after two days .

then avni came near shweta nd seek her blessings .

shweta - i missed u so much avni beta . how's you ? .....did u miss us or not ?

avni- ofcourse mummy g.... i missed u soooooo much . apki bhut yaad aati thi .

then avni hugged them both in a warm hug . nd both shweta nd neha also hugged her back with love . seeing them completely lost .......neil quickly went near them nd said.........

neil - hey..... how can u guys forget me . huh.....i am also present here . can't u see me?( dramatic tone )

neil made an annoying puppy face . then all the ladies broke the hug nd shweta went near neil nd whisper......

shweta- oye tillu .......  now just stop pretending to this poor guy  nd come give me a tight hug........( while laughing )

then neil immediately hugged his mom nd shweta also reciprocated . seeing them happy together a small smile appeared on avni's face . soon they freshend up nd then placed themselves on dinning table for morning bf . avni was serving bf to everyone .

while serving the food her dress spilled a little from her neck  nd after few seconds neha noticed the hickey on her neck ........ seeing the purple mark, a naughty smile appeared on her face nd she whisper........

neha- mom don't u think hume ek do din aur ruk kar vapis aana chahiye tha......... what say ( dramatically )

shweta - arey nehu but why ......( confusing tone )

shweta  couldn't understand her hidden meaning then neha secretly pointed towrds avni's neck nd then shweta immediately understood nd whisper.....

shweta - actually u are rights..... we are very sorry avni beta ..... we thought that u guys must be missing us .... but we didn't know that you're enjoying a lot without us.......( teasing way )

not able to say something......... both avneil  gets ambarreced nd started looking towrds each other .

avni- no....... no mummy g ..... its nothing like that . ( not facing shweta )

neha - oh really bhabhi ... if there is nothing like this then what's that.......( pointing towrds her hickey )

then avni suddenly became concious nd she immediately pushed her dress up to hide her hickey .

neha - bhabhi no need to hide it . its just me mom nd neil bhai ..... so no need to be embarraced . we've already seen ur mark of love . ( wink at avni )

hearing neha's teasing words , both avneil gets ambarraced nd started looking into each other's eyes . avni's cheeks turned crimson red due to shyness . neil also felt shy . both're just staring at each other . both share a cute eyelock . suddenly neha cleared her  throat nd broke their cute eyelock . now not able to face them avni continued her work quitely .nd neil glares at neha giving her "i'll kill u look" . nd neha whispered.........

neha - what huh...... now stop giving that look bhai . its not my fault . u people're romancing nd now u glare at me . this is not fair bhai.....( while laughing )

now avneil became more ambarreced. hearing the word romancing , avni's face turned more red due to shyness nd she loweres her head nd neil gave neha a death glare .

seeing avni's shyness , shweta gets melt nd she said.....

shweta- oye nehu.... u can't trouble my daughter in law like that . just look at her kitna blush kar rahi hai bechaari .

hearing shweta, avni's cheeks turned more red like a tomato nd neil just admires looking at her blush .

neil- ohh my God...... is she really blushing or m i just dreaming ? ( confuse khanna )

while thinking all this avneil 're drowning into each other's eyes not willing to break their eyelock . then neha coughed a bit then both avneil came out of their trance . both avneil 're hell ambarreced nd not able to face them avni quickly rushed to their bedroom while neil smiled at her antics . now neil gulped down due to fear of his crazy family 's interrogation .

neil- mom actually i'm getting late for police station so i have to leave now... will talk to u later......( in hurry)

he somehow managed to escape from there leaving his family behind.....

then neil drove towrds police station.

at police station

neil was sitting on his chair tossing  some important files . he wasn't able to concentrate on his work . he was just looking here nd there . he was busy thinking about their morning convo nd her blushing face......

neil- was she really blushing or was it just my illusion ? or if its true then why m i thinking that much about it . why m i feeling some different emotions for her . o my god...... yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai .... why m i unable to focus on my work . morning when i saw her in that ankle lenght dress , for sometime my heart skipped a beat . she looked so innocent nd beautiful at the same tym . her pink lustious lips , her pink cheeks , her long black hairs nd her mole above her lips.... everything about her caged my heart . avni what u have done to me......( unknown feelings )

while thinking about all this his lips aitomatically curved into slight smile . but suddenly his smile turned into frown nd

neil- no..... no neil ... u can't fall weak at her . she doesn't deserve ur care . she is bloody criminal. bcs of her only an innocent girl lost her life . don't forget ur revenge neil . just close ur eyes nd remember the day when she slapped u in front of everyone . yes she insulted you in front of everyone . u can't feel for her . u just have to hate her . atleast for that innocent girl .... u have to hate her . you can't make this girl ur weakness . you need to stop thinking about her . that girl avni is just a criminal nothing else . she is nothing to u neil . i will never forgive u Avni Mehta for what u did to me . u will suffer more than me . nd thats the promiss to u avni..........( with bloodshot eyes )

now neil was not in his senses . he was not able to understand his unknown feelings . his eyes're blazing with anger . monster in him was awake . his revenge was overpowering his feelings. he was busy in his thinking session when suddenly DD came there nd thats when neil came back to his senses....

DD- sir a weak passed by but still we haven't find any clue about pandit case . sir we can't even go to jagooda. ( dissapointing manner)

neil- but DD , we can't loose hope so easily . infact we should focus on finding evidence instead of loosing hope . but how.......

DD- sir if u don't mind toh kya na hum bhabhi se help lele . i mean voh phle bhi jagooda ja chuki hai nd she is only person who can help us to reach jagooda ........

hearing avni's name .....neil gets hell angry nd his eyes turned sudden red due to rage ........ he got up from his chair nd grabbed DD 's collar in a tight grip . he bursted in anger.....

neil - enough DD...... i don't need any kind of help from that bloody criminal . today we are so helpless only bcs of her . we're never that much helpless but all thanks to avni ...... bcs of her we have lost all hopes . far from taking her help i don't even want to hear her name . so it would be better to keep her away from this case . get it.........( with full anger )

DD gets shocked seeing neil's sudden reaction. his eyes widened in shock . he didn't expected this side of neil .  he mummbled sorry to him . nd then neil realize what he did nd was immedeately left his collar nd whisper......

neil- i am sorry DD .... i don't want to do this but i don't know how i lost my control . i just heard her name from ur mouth nd then i lost my control . i am sorry DD ..... pls forgive me . ( looking down )

DD - its okay sir..... you don't need to apologize .

neil- thanks buddy .....nd one more thing pls stop calling her bhabhi . she is not ur bhabhi . toh ab case ke baare mein discuss karein.......( 😎 )

precap  - have patience

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maahi❣