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I am working on improving my sentence structure, my grammar and my spelling but it is kinda hard. Sorry guys, I am under 16 and I know it is not much of an excuse it is all i have to offer for now. You will see major improving because i'm rewriting this story so hopefully it'll get better.

Lots of people commented on my way of writing. I know it's cringey I am working on it. So please don't sugarcoat it and point out mistakes/ confusing phrases and plot holes.

Remember, the story is NOT perfect all.
You wouldn't believe when I tell you this but i edited it 3 times. This being the fourth. So Yeah. It's a bit of a warning.

Second off,

Thanks for deciding to read this story, for supporting me, voting, commenting and encouraging me to be better. Also Big thanks to my friends for helping me with so much things and pointing out mistakes/ plot holes and many more. I wouldn't have been here without you. X

Enjoy.

12/12/2018
f r a n n y.

POLICE OFFICER -1-  ( Impatient, tired. )"Mrs. Calrson, please, calm down. It is going to be a little hard, but we need you to explain everything carefully and we want you to tell us the whole truth. Or else there will be consequences." ( Sigh. )

FRANNY-  ( Panic all over her face as she tries to wipe her wet cheeks) "DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO! OH MY GOD. I NEED MY THERAPIST RIGHT NOW. PLEASE!"

POLICE OFFICER. -2-  "Take a deep breath, Ms. Calrson. Can we ask you some questions?" ( Collected. )

FRANNY- ( Her eyes still watering as she screams )"Can I just please leave? JUST LET ME LEAVE Already!"

POLICE OFFICER. -1- ( Huffs, extremely pissed off. ) "We are so sorry, Ms. Calrson. But you can't. Please just answer this questions. We will ask you some questions and no matter what try to answer honestly. Can you do it?" ( Gets calmer when he realises she is nodding slowly. )

FRANNY- ( Voice small ) "And when I answer those questio-questions. I-I ca-can le-leave r-ri-right?"

POLICE OFFICER. -1- ( Nodding, his face blank. )

POLICE OFFICER -2- "Now let's start with the questions Alright?"

FRANNY- ( Small, afraid voice. ) "Y-yes."

POLICE OFFICER -2- : "Who is Ivan Frank? And how is he related to the whole accident?"

FRANNY-  ( Takes a deep shaky breath, trying to form a sentence. )" I.. He-- Ivan Gray was my boy-- is my uh, boyfriend. And in the same time my stepsister's Ex boyfriend. If that makes sense."

POLICE OFFICER -1- ( Puzzled look, judging. ) "You are doing alright. When was the first time you've ever seen Mr. Frank?" ( Pauses. ) "Are you alright? You look pale. We can take a break if you want."

FRANNY-  ( Shakes her head, squeezing her eyes shut. ) "No. I am fine." ( voice hoarse and raspy. Sounds like she's been crying for a long time, she clears her throat. )  I saw him last year at the end of September. College was starting. Um and yeah, Can-.. um you call me Francisca or Franny?"

POLICE OFFICER -2- ( Nodding, giving her an encouraging look. ) "You are actually doing great, Francisca. What happened during the Incident."

FRANNY : ( Suddenly panicked. ) "Um I-I was with them, I was trying t-to s-stop Diana---Oh my god. I am awful." ( Sobbing loudly as she covers her face with her hands wetting them, sniffs. ) "Can I see my therapist Please? I need her. ( to herself. ) So bad..."

Police officer -2-  ( Worried, impatient. ) Francisca, dear, Calm down, you are doing great, can you please tell us more? ( Sighs in relief when she collcts herself again. )

FRANNY- ( Nodding to herself, mumbling a few words before talking again. ) "I-I as I said, um I was trying to s-st-stop Diana from killing him. I knew about all of this, but I-I. I'm so sorry, Oh my gosh, I can't believe myself. I am so so sorry. I-I knew it all. I knew what my sister, Diana was planning. She planned with me everything and I knew about it. Diana messed with my head and I-I-I beli-believed her." ( Pausing, talking more clearly. ) "So.. I- Diana tricked me, she then met up with all of us. She was trying to kill us--me specifically..." ( Takes a deep breath fiddling with her fingers letting the tears fall freely.) "She-- I.... am sorry, I can't say anything else. It is hard."

POLICE OFFICER -1- "It is fine... you are alright now. Just please focus on us. When was the first time you've seen Mrs. Lane?"

FRANNY- ( Heart heavy, and eyes watery.) After four years. ( quietly ) It started with her asking me for a favor..........

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Hope you will enjoy this Teen fiction, mystery/thriller Story. Xx