Author: @crismae101
Review by: @Loversgonewild

Title: The title is good and it matches with the storyline but I would suggest you to give a more catchy title. Otherwise, the current one is good.

Rating: 4/5

Book cover: You do need a good cover. Try requesting for a cover in the cover shops. My friend gemini22t can help you out. She makes amazing covers.😊

Rating: 3.5/5

Description: Good news! I loved the description. It was well-written, short and gave only the details it should. So you have done a good job there! When I read it, I really wanted to click the read button.😉

Rating: 5/5

Content:-

1) Language: The language is pretty good and understandable. It's simple yet well-written. I have a phobia from the use of too much of sophisticated words!😜

2) Style of writing: I loved it! I liked the way you are writing the story from Stephanie's point of view who happens to be the best friend of Emily Schilling. I have never come across a story which is written from a friend's point of view. I hope you can drag it till the end. Good luck!😄

3) Grammar: There were minor grammatical errors here and there. You can easily fix those once you revise your chapters.

4) Vocabulary and punctuation: No mistakes though try to use synonyms of words so that they don't get repeated.

Rating: 4.5/5

SOME TIPS AND SUGGESTIONS:-

1) As I always say try keeping a book of thesaurus or try searching for synonyms at www.thesaurus.com.

2) Try adding quotes, pictures, videos at the beginning of the chapters. This will make them more interesting.

3) The messages which the characters received is written in bold. In my opinion, you can write them in italics. No need to bold them.

4) Try sticking to one tense only while writing a story.

5) Before you write the Author's note at the end of a chapter, try drawing a line just to separate it from the main content.

Okay that's all from me. I couldn't really find anything much to say! If you ever need any help don't hesitate to pm me. Your story has potential. Keep writing! 👍