Author: gemini22t
Reviewer: @Loversgonewild

Title: The title is good but I would suggest you to come up with a title that has mystery hidden within itself. Since your genre is mystery/thriller, I think a more mysterious title will suit the story.

Rating: 4/5

Book cover: A more eye catching cover will be good. You are a cover maker, you can surely do that! 😉

Rating: 4/5

Description: The description is well written and precise. It's very good. One suggestion- If you are writing it in a past tense, try to write the whole description in past tense. Otherwise, it's really good. You have given enough information but yet it makes the reader want to go ahead and check out the story.

YOU WROTE-

Paul and Anthony get caught that night and are sent to jail for ten years each. The chief of police offers them a deal, information about their employer in exchange of half their sentence.

When Paul is released from prison after five years, his life has turned upside down.

CORRECTION-

Paul and Anthony got caught that night and were sent to jail for ten years each. The Chief of Police offered them a deal, information about their employer in exchange of half their sentence.

When Paul was released from prison after five years, his life had turned upside down.

Rating: 4.5/5

Content:-

1) Language: It's easy to read, no such teeth crumbling words. The language is simple yet well written. Good job!

2) Style of writing: I really liked your style of writing. The scenes flowed and the dialogues didn't feel forced. Good job again!

3) Grammar: I didn't find any such grammatical mistakes.

4) Vocabulary and Punctuation: Your vocabulary is good and there are also no such punctuation mistakes.

Rating: 5/5

SOME TIPS AND SUGGESTIONS:-

1. I think there's no need to include both prelude and prologue. Prelude generally deals with music. It is an introductory piece performed or written in the beginning of the main piece while prologue is an introductory part written in the beginning of literary works. So my advice would be to change the chapter titled Prelude to Prologue and Prologue to Chapter 1.

2. Try keeping a book of thesaurus or try searching for synonyms of a particular word in www.thesaurus.com.This will ensure that a particular word doesn't get repeated too much.

3. Try adding quotes and pictures related to the chapters. It will make the chapters more interesting.

That will be all from me. You said you were not so sure about writing a book of genre mystery but I think you should go and write it. Don't worry, no one starts off perfectly. Even when I posted my first draft it was so bad that I deleted it😅 but see yours is not that bad😊. Keep up the good work and I wish you all the very best for your upcoming chapters. I will be waiting for your updates!!

If you ever need any help from me, don't hesitate to ask me.