"Wouldn't it be awesome..."- published April ?? 2015
*commentary in bold
*also please note that I'm reacting to my own cringey 14 y/o writing. Not someone else's.
Wouldn't it be awesome if somehow on a Chase or something, Dally ends up in Long Island and goes through the trees and the cops can't get through, then he sees Camp Half Blood, then gets claimed by Ares.
Ah yes. Percy Jackson.
Go on.
Then, Johnny and Pony arrive, and are revealed as demigods, Pony a son of Appollo and Johnny a son of Nemesis. And then the whole book the Outsiders, was a quest they went on and the socs were the monsters, but we couldn't read it the real way because we aren't demigods.
Ok but like... so much to
unpack here.
First, how the fuck do
Johnny and Pony get
to New York? I know smol
CC knew The Outsiders
took place in Tulsa.
Of course Pony is a son of
Apollo. Geez, baby CC.
Try being original for once.🙄
And I'm guessing I
had Johnny as a son
of Nemesis because his
parents were abusive?
Because abusive parents
don't just exist, as we all
know.
What the fuck kind
of boring ass quest would
they be on where they
kill one monster and
hide in the church for the
rest of the quest?
And of course the socs must
be monsters. Assholes don't
just exist, you know.
Yeah. Because it's totally
not like The Outsiders is
deliberately set in the
real world and if it were
a fantasy world the meaning
would be lost. No. We need
some magic and demigods
up in here.
I don't know about you, but I think that would be absolutely amazing.
Wait a few years,
baby CC.
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