Name: Fallenbird. I like the name! Fallen is a nice prefix.
Gender: She-cat. Okay.

Sexuality: Pansexual. I don't know much about things like this, so I will just say cool! Good for her.

Past Names: Fallenkit, Fallenpaw, Bird (backstory for more info on names). I assume she was a loner/rogue/kittypet at some point?

Clan: ValleyClan (ValleyClan is known for being passive aggressive and quick to flee. They are excellent climbers, and can jump pretty high. They have an underground camp, and underground tunnels which are used during leaf bare or to flee if they are being invaded by the other clans. ValleyClan's two neighboring Clan, MoutainClan lives on the right side of ValleyClan. They are stronger and believe they have higher power than both ValleyClan and StoneClan. StoneClan lives on the left side of ValleyClan, and don't really fight that much. They are pretty lazy, and don't get involved in most quarrels. These clans all believe in StarClan and the dark forest.) They sound like interesting Clans. They kind of remind me of my four, BleakClan, EmberClan, RippleClan and MeadowClan. 

Past Clans: The "Rebels" , Loner. Okay, so she was a loner. Cool.

Appearance: Fallenbird is a muscular she-cat. She has large, yet fleet paws. This helps her make tunnels for her clan. Her pelt is short. Fallenbird has a few tawny sections on her pelt, the rest is a dark gray-blue (almost black). She has spots on her body, which are the darker versions of the section on her fur (Example: On the tawny sections of her body, she would have darker tawny spots. On her dark gray-blue parts of her body, she would have darker spots). Fallenbird has dull, hazel-green eyes. She has an average sized tail, and curled (not folded) ears. She has a small, narrow, muzzle and a large scar across her shoulder. She sounds like a very interesting cat! I love the addition of hazel eyes, as I don't see many hazel eyed OCs. 

Personality: Fallenbird is a somewhat stubborn she-cat. She bends the rules to work in her favor, and is somewhat disliked throughout her clan. She has a sharp tongue, and most of her opinions are against the warrior code, there-for making her a disliked cat throughout the clans. Although she is somewhat bitter, at times she can be gentle. She is kind with her kin, and close clanmates. She is a very determined cat and always believe she is doing the right thing for her and her clanmates. Sounds pretty good and balanced. 

Mate: Sparrow - a tabby brown tom, a loner, once part of the clans yet left (former mate) Sparrow is a pretty common name, but that's okay. 

Harestar- a Siamese tom with blue eyes, leader of ValleyClan (current mate) Cool. 

Kits: Twig- brown, curly furred tom with green eyes, wandering loner (Litter of Sparrow) Dawnripple- tawny tom with hazel eyes and delicate paws, trans, FTM, StreamClan (Litter of Sparrow) Nettlekit- tiny gray she-cat, deceased (Litter of Sparrow) Marshivy- a white and gray tom with white flecks on his back, StreamClan (Litter of Harestar) Cedarsplash- a Siamese she-cat with blue eyes, StreamClan (Litter of Harestar) Nettlefang- gray she-cat with blue eyes, StreamClan (Litter of Harestar) Lots of kits! Wow. 

Other Family and Kin: Spotflight- a gray tom with hazel eyes (Former leader, now retired elder in StreamClan, Father) Mistyspeckle- a blue she-cat with white spots (Deceased, Mother) Birdcall- a tawny she-cat with blue eyes (Deceased, Sister) Not much to comment on here. 

Cause of death or future death: Blood loss and wounds in an attempt to kill Sparrow . She tried to kill her mate? Why?

Rank at Death: Warrior. Normal.

 Past Ranks: Kit, Apprentice, Warrior, Loner, Queen, Deputy of "The Rebels" Who are the rebels?

 Good Traits: Very persuasive, very social, and (somewhat) kind. Balanced for both. 

Bad traits: Very controlling, stubborn, rebellious, and rude. 

 Hunting: 7.5/10 

Fighting: 8/10 

Swimming: 4/10

 Climbing: 8.5/10

 Leadership Skills: 5.5/10

 Reputation: 3.5 

Pretty balanced out! 

 Likes: Her kits, open spaces (no trees, bushes, etc), her sister, and nighttime hunting. Nice, normal things to like.

Dislikes: Sparrow, being alone, and some of her past choices. Cool.

 Scars/Injures: A large scar on her shoulder. She earned this scar with a fight with Sparrow, right before she left to rejoin the clans. Okay, cool.

Backstory: Fallenbird was born as Fallenkit, along with her sister Birdkit. She was named after falling, and was teased about it throughout kit hood. Her parents were Spotstar and Mistyspeckle. As a kit, Birdkit was very active and enjoyed playing moss ball. She was a very eager kit, and would often sneak out of the camp with the other kits in the nursery. She often leaded this, and would blame the other kits if they got caught. She took quite interest in Harekit, and most of the time she would hang out with him. Fallenkit became Fallenpaw, Birdkit became Birdpaw, and Harekit became Harepaw. The apprentices became very close, especially Birdpaw and Harepaw. Fallenpaw grew quite jealous, and began to hang out in the twoleg place, in hopes to (somehow) make her sister jealous. She found Sparrow, and grew quite close with the handsome young tom. She visited him often, and began to knew some of his fellow friends. They had big plans, to leave attack the clans and take over. Fallenpaw didn't like it, yet she agreed it was an "ok plan". Fallenpaw failed her assessment, while her fellow friends become warriors. Birdpaw became Birdcall, and Harepaw became Hareleap. Fallenpaw was filled with bitterness, and fled. She joined "The Rebels". That's what Sparrow called it. They attacked the clans, but brutally lost. Fallenpaw never shown herself in battle, because she was to ashamed to do so. In the battle, Birdcall died at the paws of Sparrow. Fallenpaw resented Sparrow foe his actions yet still stayed apart of the group. She changed her name to bird, in memory of her sister. The cats in the "rebels" begun to leave or go crazy- and Bird had enough of it. She rejoined the clans, and Spotstar let her in with open paws. She finally became a warrior, and became Fallenbird. Her clanmates resented her dearly, and they thought of her as unequal. This pushed Fallenbird to work harder.She later found out that she was expecting Sparrow's kits, and later moved toward the nursery. Her mother soon died after she birthed her kits, as she was attacked by a fox. Fallenbird never wanted these kits, and tried to desperately to give them to the queens- yet they already had enough on their paws. So- she attempted to give the kits to Sparrow. On the trip there, Nettlekit died while trying to cross a River in their territory. She had managed to only persuade Sparrow into taking care of one, and took her only surviving kit back to the clan. She lied and said that her other kit, Twigkit and and Nettlekit were taken by foxes. She lied and said that she only found Dawnkit, and the clan believed her. She lied and told Hareleap that the kits were his, and he searched the valley endlessly. He never truly stopped searching. Hareleap would always look on patrols and always would keep an eye up for them. She had a littler with Hareleap, who became Harestar, after her father died. She took care of the kits, and enjoyed their company well. She learned that Sparrow was coming back and trying to remake the rebels, yet she thought that she must put a stop to it. She sneaked out of camp one night, and Brutally attacked Sparrow. The two fought for a while, yet both of them were losing terribly. She won- yet barely. She died where she fought- and watched from StarClan as her family moved on.

First, I like the addition of failing her assessment. Second, I like that she named herself after her sister. It's a bit strange she was let in so openly after her mate killed one of their warriors, plus she fought against her Clan but yeah. The part where she tried to bring her kits to Sparrow, reminds me of Bluestar bringing her kits to Oakheart in the actual books, or Mapleshade bringing her litter to RiverClan. The ending is sort of bittersweet, and I like it. Overall, this is a very good OC. Balanced, interesting and obviously well thought out. Fallenbird gets a 8.7. Thank you so much for submitting, and feel free to submit more! 

Bonus: What i think she would look like: (Not quite, switch the eyes but this is as close as I could find.)