Name: Ashstar (at death which I haven't decided yet.) Okay. 

Past names: Ashkit, Ashpaw, Ashheart. 'Heart' is a pretty generic suffix, and without proper meaning or cause, it is just kind of unremarkable. There was also a cannon cat in the real books named Ashheart, so I suggest maybe changing her prefix to something more meaningful and unique. 

Clan: ThunderClan (I spun a wheel). The Clan a cat belongs to is quite important, and I recommend putting some thought into it and not just spinning a wheel. 

Past Clans: None, Alright.

Gender: She-cat. Okay!

Sexually: Straight. Not much to say here. 

Appearance: Dark grey ombré-like she-cat with forest green eyes with extremely long fur. You could definitely add more detail. Tail length, scars, nose and paw pad colour, details and markings, etc. It's a good start but needs more.

Personally: kind and caring to her kin and mate. Will kill for friends or family. (Has actually happened while she was an apprentice) Also lacking. Is she outspoken or erratic? Maybe has a quick temper? Dive deeper. And why did she kill them/how? An apprentice lacks the skills to kill a full-grown cat. 

Mate: Toadfur. Okay, does he have an appearance? 

Kits: I haven't named them yet but she does have some. Okay... Temporary names could have sufficed. 

Other family or kin: Shadowclaw, Stormsight, littermates. Parents: Darkblaze, and Cindertail. Other kin: Fernpool. ( med cat), Bluefur, Icefur, Lightpaw (at death), Snowpaw. Again, names need appearances to match them. And who are Bluefur, Icefur, Lightpaw, Snowpaw, etc, etc? Bluefur is also a cannon name.

Cause of death: Idk I haven't decided. Again, temporary deaths or at least ONE of her nine lives. Even something easy and generic like dying in battle or on a Thunderpath would do. 

Rank at death: leader. Okay.

Past ranks: Kit, Apprentice, Warrior, Senior Warrior. Alright.

Good traits: kind, caring, little bit protective of friends. Okay, nice! 

Bad traits: Will do anything to protect family. Little bit menacing at times. Murderous at times. Murderous? To who? And why?

 Hunting: 6/10

Fighting: 1000000/10 (descent of Lionblaze in a different multiverse.)

Swimming:1/10

Climbing: 2/10

Leadership skills: 10/10 (got them from Firestar)

Reputation: 9/10 (killed some cats)

So... No cat is ever really a 10/10. Even if someone is a good writer, they can get better. Good artist? Can get better. Just like no one is ever really a 0/10, nobody is ever usually a 10/10. Also, I read the note about the stuck key. Also, is it a 9/10 because she killed cats and they approved, or because she killed cats and they didn't approve? 

Likes: hikes, flowers, fighting, hanging out with friends and family. Alright, normal things to like! 

Dislikes: swimming, climbing, waiting around, not doing anything, and cats who don't like her family or friends. Okay.

Scars/Injuries: scar on her ear missing top part. If she's so murderous and also a leader who has lived a long, battle-strewn life, I would assume she has more scars, even if they are not visible. 

Backstory: I am just going to put the book title. Ashstar's Powers. So... I read it, and it didn't even go to her warriorhood. So I have no idea about anything else in her later life. But from what I did read, it was confusing. Ashkit killed a fox...? Some sort of prophecy? The book is messy, has a very slow, confusing plot, and Ashkit is way too overpowered. There's no drive or purpose to the story so far, and it explains little. The scenes are also very messy and disconnected.

Other: Is able to beat anyone in battle. How? That is simply not possible. Yeah, I get that she's a descendant of Lionblaze, but unless she has been blessed and given powers by StarClan, she just can't do that. And even if she was blessed and given power, why? What's her purpose? 

Overall, this OC is quite poorly thought out. She has a good start, but for now, there are just too many holes in her character, plot, and the other characters in her story. She gets a 4.8/10. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to you. Thank you so much for submitting!

Bonus: What I think she looks like: