So I wrote this is sixth grade and it's very rushed. I thought I'd get some feedback since I wanted to rewrite this as a more detailed Short Story. [(Not Posting that though :(]

The 22nd Century was filled with 2 major perils. For starters, the world was now ruled by an evil cyborg named Simon Says. The second peril was that he was invincible. The inventor of this cyborg, was no longer alive, but before he died he put his super powers into two babies next to each other at the hospital. The inventor, Dan, was wounded and had transferred his powers into the two babies. But before he left the earth, he hollered "power stay locked!" When he said that the powers were hidden and until the power was discovered, it would stay locked.
12 years later, the world was still ruled by Simon Says. The babies were grown up and named Trina and Erin. They both were best friends since birth, and were in Middle School. They had met another girl, Stella who was their best friend also. Erin and Trina had no idea that they had the power to control technology and machines. They faced many weird coincidences, where they were a minute away from dying.
One day they were walking down the street when one of Simon Says' robots appeared in front of the girls. It swooped past Trina and Stella and tried to attack Erin but startlingly, the robot froze and Trina was frozen with her hands out toward the robot. "How did that happen? Trina h-how did you," Stella croaked out breaking the silence,"d-do that!" Erin was shivering, but got up swishing her dirty blond hair reluctantly, and stared at Trina with her hazel eyes. Trina looked stunned herself. "I-I don't know," she stammered, staring at the robot with her blue eyes. Trina and Erin had no idea what had happened that day but strangely enough brown-haired Stella knew.
"Master, I have found out who has the powers of defeating you," said Stella to her master, Simon Says. Yes, it was true that Erin and Trina didn't know about Stella working for Simon Says but Stella had discovered Trina and Erin's doom. "Simon Says tell me," said Simon Says' dark, deep voice.
"Your hunch was right master. Erin and Trina are the two people who have the powers. But master, they don't know what they have. Should I, in-inform them," Stella croaked. "Simon Says silence! Do not even dare to tell them! If you do, you will pay dearly," and with Simon Says saying that, Stella ran from the dark, damp, and gloomy lair. "Erin! Trina! I have to tell you something!" Stella was at Trina's house where Erin and Trina were siting on Trina's bed. "Look it's, it's very, very," panted Stella, "important. I know this is crazy and I bet you'll be very mad at me after I tell you this but you have to hear me out!" "Whoa Stella calm down! Now sit and then tell us," said Erin softly. "Well first you should know that the reason why the robot didn't attack you," there was a dramatic pause,"is because of your super powers to control machines and technology when your in danger. And I know this because....well I-I work for Simon Says! There I said it!" There was a brief silence. "Get out of my house," Trina said softly. Stella ran home.
The next few days zoomed by for Stella but not Trina and Erin. They had told everyone they knew that they had super powers. And also told them to help them defeat Simon Says and Stella. They had all met at the library to plan the day they were going to attack. Trina was Leader and Erin was Co-Leader. They planned to attack April 4th, two months from that day.
After two months of training, planing and hard work Trina and Erin's rebellion was ready to attack. Stella knew what was going on(since she was spying on them,)and had prepared the battlefield with Simon Says and his armies. The fight was on.
"Ready to do this," Trina asked Erin. "Yeah," said Erin with rage running through her voice. "Simon Says fight," said Simon Says' deep voice. And with that the war had begun
Trina and Erin marched towards the robots with fire in there eyes, overthrowing each cyborg robot leading toward Simon Says. Finally they reached him but in front of him standing there, with her eyes filled with tears, was Stella. "Join us. Please," said Trina, "we need you." But Sarah wouldn't budge. There was something different about her now. Something bad, something inhuman. She had been turned into a cyborg too. Realizing this, both girls, using their powers destroyed her and Simon Says with one shot. It was over. The world was saved by Trina and Erin. They had saved millions of lives but killed an innocent girl-Stella.