Ok. This started out as a rant about reader inserts. I have changed it. This is a rant about poor writing skills.
Disclaimer: I mean no offence to anyone reading this. I just get aggravated a lot.

First complaint: Inconsistent perspective. As in, going from saying "I" to saying "Rose". So from first to third. I can understand if it happens once or twice. I've caught myself doing that. But, in all honesty, I HATE it when people start a story in first, skip to third, skip back to first, and then back to third. Seriously, person, PICK A PERSPECTIVE AND STICK WITH IT!!
Now that I've said that, let's move on.

Second complaint: Incorrect grammar. Yes, I'm one of those grammar Nazis. I understand that NateWantsToBattle has said there is a special place in hell for us. But I just get really bothered by grammar used incorrectly.
(As I was writing this, I was reading it out loud to my parents. My dad was telling me to stop reading other people's stuff. Kinda hard for me.)
So, it bothers me when people put "exited" instead of "excited".
Yeah... I'm that person.

That's all I got. I started this on Sunday and stopped now. So... Yeah.
Bye!
Rose out!