I'm hella weak lmao, the lengths people go through to make a reader an orphan is too fucking great, it hurts. I don't understand the fad of a character being parentless all the time, like I mean, sometimes it's alright, but if all your stories or most of your one shots consists of the character being orphaned, there's a problem lolol.

I just read a one shot book where the character is at a concert and the fucking reader starts tearing up out of nowhere because her parents were famous once, but they were shot on stage. Lmao, bitch what? It was so out of nowhere that I had to take a minute and laugh at wtf I was reading.

It's funny the way they try to make it sad to make the reader have feels, but it doesn't work if there's nothing leading up to the climax, causing it to just be bland and expectant. It's basically the author slapping you in the face with it and trying to force you to have a sad emotion just because they wrote it.

I also noticed with those type of stories, many of them likes to add their little A/N in the middle of their sentences to get their two sense in lol. Stop doing that, it ruins the immersion you twats. They also still do that unfunny time skips too lol, stop it. No one wants to see, "Le time skip from your's truly~" or some shit like that. What is this? 2010? It sucks when a decent writer does these things, but what's even worse is if they do both those things... and lyrics. Whew, I just can't with those lmaooo S K I P!