As I mentioned in my last chapter. This is some of my rants about what I hate the character of female Y/n. 

1; "I was abused from my mother and father ever since when I was little, and to this day" .  Cut the clip here. I think the getting abused scenario really does remind me of the Gacha hated child GLMM, there really is nothing wrong with what people would be wanting to make Y/n abused so their love interests can help them. But I think this has been a bit of a problematic thing, if Y/n was abused, she would've been a complete mute or she would've told one of her close friends or a trusted adult to help her get rid of those parents instead of just letting herself get abused waiting until her love interest comes to rescue her. Realistically, abusing someone is actually serious, but now a these days, they take abusing like as if it is "cool" seriously, what is wrong with those kids? Do they want to get abused by their own parents? Really, stop with that. Unless if you actually search what it's like, then I can consider it is not worth "cringy" to read that kind of fan fic. 

2; "I tied up my hair into a messy bun and wore a black hoodie with black pants, I'm not really like the other girls" Again. What is it with everybody writing the messy bun thing? Where have that trend first started that from? Anywho, I think the author could've at least made Y/n like tie her hair up like a pony tail, or just braid her hair. Also, the black hoodie and black pants thing, I mean, I wear a black hoodie, because, I like the color and I like the black pants so it can match with my other color top outfit. Now, I think imagining this, I think it would really do look cute, but the I am not like the other girls confused me. There are millions of other girls that can be wearing black as well. I mean sure, they're personalities can be different, but to make Y/n look more special, I think they have did that "I am not like the other girls" thing confuses me, what makes Y/n so special? 

3; Y/n is abused and bullied even at home and school.  Really, how can Y/n just let those bully get away? Does she not even care or think to tell the teacher and report them so she won't have to have her life like a miserable hell? Eh, probably she is waiting for her Prince Charming to come and rescue her. But really, report someone that can ACTUALLY help you! Not one of those bad boys, what do you expect from them? They're careless, and a mess, really. 

4; Y/n stuttering. For example. "H-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-h-he-hel-lo...." Alright, there really is nothing wrong stuttering, but really, I think a more better way in stuttering is. 

Y/n: "Ah, good morning, I-I meant good afternoon sir...! I wanted to ask- I mean! Request that I need your help on something.."  I would say, use this kind of stuttering where Y/n cuts off to re fix  her sentence, that's what I do normally do when I get a but awkward or when I meet someone new, even though that is a bit weird-  

5; Y/n singing in her room when she is sad, and their love interest comes in the room.  Okay, okay, now, I think I have a bit to rant about this one. I mean, when I feel sad, I would sing as well or if I feel stressed  I sing in the shower and sing some Korean or any of those fan made songs from different fandoms such as Batim, Undertale, DDLC, Fnaf and more haha. I don't get why Y/n has to sing "Fight song" or any other depressing songs, if she wants like cheer herself, why must she always sing "Fight Song" for example? I mean, I gotta admit, that the meaning of Fight Song and all of those other songs like "Copycat" and more really does get me remembering my Gacha phase. Fight Song takes place, where somebody is suffering through something such as cancer or anything that they are going through, and sings that song to pour out their emotions.

Y/n on the other hand sings that song-? Is she suffering from breast cancer? Does she have cancer? I think not, seriously, if her life is really that miserable, like I said again, sorry for annoying you all but..Seriously! Get a teacher to help you! Not your love interest! What if they don't know how to help you?! What if your love interest doesn't know what to do? They are not your mental therapist. 

6; Y/n the hybrid neko goddess and more. I- I really have nothing to say for this one- but this is just Mary Sue- but don't go attacking these people that have made those kind of types, besides, those fan girls might've changed as well, who knows? But this is a really bad concept of Y/n, it's like Gacha 2018. Especially when Y/n literally have all of those powers but then get raped by somebody. Like how does that even work? Did her powers just drain away??? 

Y/n the baddie and the cool like outfits; Oh boy...I absolutely hated this one. Y/n is a badass by wearing those cool outfits? Does that make her a baddie? No..it really doesn't, those outfits are just to make boys get their attention on her. If Y/n is a badass like character, then like make her super smart or something, and what also requires is, her personality could be fearless as well. The outfits won't actually help her on battle, she'll get injuries when showing too much of her skin, but for the sake of it, it's like anime where the magical girls have to fight with their poofy dresses and with those heavy looking hair. ....can Y/n just wear something like that is actually for a battle-? Like a military uniform or something, or like black widow from Marvel, black widow is badass though.

Y/n being edgy and emotionless; I still don't understand about this one as well. Just because Y/n would be edgy, does not mean that she'll literally hate everyone. I'm not sure what being edgy is like either, although, I have to say. I guess I was edgy back in 5th grade. Saw some of my old art book and...yeah, it's embarrassing, I somewhat drew a bunch of anime girls killing and with those kind of eyes. :/ man..it physically embarrasses and hurts me. Anywho. I think Y/n being edgy as a middle school girl would be funny, and her friends teases Y/n for being edgy in middle school, and she get's embarrassed. Seriously, why does she have to hate even her love interest so called, she acts like as if she hates them. It's pretty annoying..but let's just be defensive for edgy Y/n that she had a sad backstory and hates society because of her past what she have experienced and has a trust issue. Not gonna blame that one, I kind have that as well. I'm just gonna excuse that Y/n is in one of her phases. Lol.

Short Y/n; There are out in the world where there are short people, and as an adult as well. But they often just make Y/n short and chubby so their love interest can obviously just either flirt or protect her. A little cliche don't you all think? 

Alright, I do think this is all for now. What do you all think? Sorry for writing this so long. ;-; I'm sure most of you guys just skipped this.