Thank you CollinsandDevan2 for helping me come up with this resolution!

So i have a few scraped writing ideas that I've been working on but I haven't finished them yet😰😰 SOOO i decided to post one of them on my Collins and Devan Key Short Story book and maybe you guys can give your feedback and possibly send me ideas or inspiration on how I should continue it!

What do you guys think? Can you help me?