One Winged Angel and Ice To Meet You
WHAT?!? I'M RANTING ABOUT MY OWN STORIES?!? Yes. Why? Because I just hate them.
If you look back on One Winged Angel compared to my newer stuff, then you'll see it doesn't reflect my writing skills at all as they are today. Here are some reasons why.
1. Transcripts
Yeah. I was so uncreative with this book that I used transcripts from the RWBY wiki instead of writing my own stuff. I am honestly ashamed of myself, come on me, you're more creative than this! All I did was copy and paste the tramscript and then add some dialogue from my characters! Speaking of which-
2. The characters.
Yeah, Team LIAR isn't that great. Isabelle, Raviera and Amara, you three may have been my first OCs but it shows you were. They are just...So bad. No development whatsoever, and if they got development, I telled, I didn't show like I should have! Now, while they'll always have a special place in my heart, they are complete and utter Mary Sues, and I'll admit that! Then you have the characters that never went anywhere. Hey, remember Ashling, Cinder's daughter? Well of course you didn't she only appeared in one fucking chapter and was never seen from again! Or how about Elizabeth, Weiss's aunt? Of course you didn't she only appeared in one chapter!
Now, why do I also mention Ice To Meet You? I'll tell you why. The ending was rushed. Yeah. It was fucking rushed! Clearly because Salem got defeated somehow with no explanation at all! Characters, including a self insert which I am ashamed of for doing, that went nowhere and only appeared a couple times!
Now, what should I do? Honestly, I don't know. I don't know if I wanna continue One Winged Angel anymore since it REALLY doesn't reflect what I am as a writer now, should I quit it and leave it as a remnant of the past, or if I should start over with better characters, better writing and more planned out instead of winging it every chapter? As for Ice To Meet You, I'll keep it up.
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