+...The cover does NOT belong to me...+

TravisBarlatier wanted to make mention that "it's based off the Powerpuff Girls Z anime and will have many crossovers in the future. The girls are 17 years old instead of 13 in ths story." 

Currently, this book is NOT completed.

*Spoilers Ahead*

Summary: After only 2 months of having their powers, Blossom, Buttercup, and Bubbles meet a strange trio of boys--who've accidentally received powers similar to the PPGs'. They eventually decide to work together and go against the RRB, pretty much the group that is the opposites of the PPG.

Alright, here's the review portion!

Starting off with grammar. It needs work... No period--end of sentence.
Not kidding. It literally needs periods, as well as correct punctuation before, during, and after each and every sentence. Most of the time, sentences (that shouldn't be together) are mushed together in ways that it feels like one sentence is a paragraph. It needs a bit of work.

Secondly, I really noticed you like using curse words in every other sentence. I will admit, you did add a Mature Rating, I will give you that, but you seem to add words like "N***a" and "f**k" way too often. It's fine every so often, but not as often as that... I couldn't even really go a few sentences without seeing something that could be found either slightly offensive (if taken the wrong way, which can easily be done by some) or it's just way too repetitive for comfort.
I'm not saying to get rid of all of the curse words, but just quite a few of them.

Paragraph spacing is fine, but probably could use some work. That's probably caused by the first point reviewed.

The characters....Hmmm... Let me think about this. Well, they seem to blend together like they are the same character. You only really see names for the characters, but hardly any (if any) descriptive details to show how each character is different from the next. For instance, I don't really even know what the main 3 guys look like, let alone their names to differentiate each of them from the other. It can prove difficult for some, if not all, readers who are trying to figure out details like it's a game of Jeopardy.

Unfortunately, I really didn't see a lot of things I liked with this book. Other than the in-general concept of the book, I really didn't like it. I did like where this book was starting to head. You're book is going in the right direction, but I would suggest for you to take your time writing to worry about quality, rather than quantity.
Your stories will be written a lot better if you take your time and slow down the writing process. That way, you can grasp any and all ideas that process through when you write. It's just a suggestion; you don't have to listen to me, but at least give re-writing this book a try.

You don't need to completely delete everything. Just go through each chapter slowly--give a chapter a few slow reads and proof-read through all your content to consider things you can change and things you can keep. Kind of like a "spring cleaning" except with your books.

Rating: 5/10

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