+...The cover does NOT belong to me...+

AlolanWeirdo had wanted to mention that this book has Pearlshipping and is based around the time "After Ash and Dawn part ways in Sinnoh."

This book is completed.

*Spoilers Ahead*

Summary: Dawn and Ash write letters to each other quite often. Especially now that they can't see each other in person. They attempt to make their lives normal without the other, but, over time, it seems to be rather difficult.
When Dawn and Ash come to realize their feelings for the other, their lives start to make a dramatic turn.

Alright, onto the review portion!

Like every review I've done with this book, I'll start off with grammar. I'm going to say this flat out: it's a big, jumbled mess. All of it. The story is clearly rushed and the grammar shows it. It's hard to tell what is happening because of the lack of spacing between paragraphs and dialogue. Heck, in most of your chapters (which are often extremely short in length), they are just one big, bulky paragraph! It also is hard to determine what you're saying because the common spelling and grammar issues found in this book. The further I read into the book, the harder it was for me to focus on what I actually should be reading.

The details in this book are minimal. There is very little going for this book, especially since it was difficult to read because, half the time, I didn't really even know what I was reading. Even your book description on Wattpad is very direct and doesn't have anything interesting going for it. I understand that writing  with more description in a book is not easy, but please try and put a bit more effort into making the description a bit more detailed. As well as almost everything else in the book. Otherwise, it feels like you're reading cliff notes... Adding in more descriptive details such as setting and character descriptions would be very helpful for you to consider. Also updating the description of the story would be very helpful--since most people can determine the ending of this book without even reading it. It takes the interest factor away from potential readers.

Talking about characters, they don't necessarily jumble together (which is good), but it is hard to determine their true personalities. Half the time, it's difficult to understand what character has that another doesn't because their personalities change every few sentences. For a while, I automatically thought that every character was bipolar and went on with it. A good way to help these characters be more independent from others is add more detail (like specified above). It would also help to have simple background on the characters, instead of just automatically thinking that every reader knows exactly what is running through your head or the character's heads. Simple character development will occur if a story isn't rushed and has specified time frames of written performance. AKA: Don't rush when you write. It ends up sloppy and your entire story will fall because of it. No matter if the concept of a story is good or not.

Like many other books I have read on Wattpad, it feels very rushed and Copy-pasted. AKA: It feels like you just slapped something together and moved on as quickly as possible from it. If you want to write a good book, take your time to preplan everything that will happen in the book. Then take a few solid hours planning and coordinating everything for the chapters you're writing at the moment. When you finish that, take your time to proofread before you click "Publish"! It will help you in the long run. Trust me when I say this...

Rating: 3.5/10

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/71100458-letters-to-you

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