+...The cover does NOT belong to me...+

This book IS completed.

*Spoilers Ahead*

Summary:  Carnal goes out on a journey of self-discovery to see if he even has a purpose to life.

Alright, onto the review portion.

The grammar usage in your story is a little messy. It isn't as bad as earlier works of yours (which is an improvement), but it needs a bit of work. The first thing I immediately notice is the lack of capitalization of names, and some species names as well. Some sentences don't really make sense with the specific word choices you have put in there. Personally, I don't really know why the word "aspect" is thrown around in sentences that don't fit the word properly. I get that you want to incorperate the title into the work itself, but this really doesn't seem to be a proper way to do it. Unless you planned for the word "aspects" to originally mean something else entirely for your book, I don't see a reason why it felt needed. (Which if it was to mean something else, you'll have to explain that better within the story to avoid future confusion).

Sentence structure is sloppy as well. Every other sentence has a "..." inbetween statements, which breaks up the flow of your book, and slows it down as a result. You can add some commas, colons, and semicolons into your sentences as well (if you feel it is justified for it to flow better).

The flow of your story is really messy. I can tell that the story is moving along in a particular direction as the story progresses, but it feels very choppy and doesn't have a particular fluidity to it. And, to be frankly honesty, that is a shame. I can see that, in comparison to some of your other books, this story can progress a bit. However, the "The Next Day" thing you mentioned a few times within the book really doesn't help. The way you can help yourself with the books is to write in 3rd person POV, like I mentioned to you before. I understand that talking in 1st person POV is really easy and everything, but it becomes increasingly more difficult the more character POVs you introduce within a set of dialogue per chapter. This can also mess up characters as well, especially if they aren't as developed as they could be.

Character wise, I am very confused about who the main character, Carnel, is exactly (it took me until a few chapters in to realize he was a Riolu--which in my opinion is too late to realize what the main character is in a basic fashion). You mentioned that he is 10 years old, so it almost feels as though you could assume the character is a human. However, there is very limited description of the characters themselves throughout the chapters. Oftentimes, I had to guess who was saying what when multiple characters were talking. In order to improve that, it would be beneficial to add those decriptions in throughout the story in a timely manner or in a chapter before the story starts for reader reference.

Overall, I feel that this book needs to be cleaned up a bit. I understand that you have been asking me for reviews of your books (and I'm grateful to do it for you and anyone else who asks), but I feel that you aren't really reading what I've been saying. If you are, it doesn't seem like you are trying to incorporate the recommendations (at least some) I mention. I am not forcing you under any circumstances to come for a review for every story, I just ask that if you are asking for a review, please don't waste my time by not (at least trying) to incorporate at least a few of my suggestions. I've done several reviews for you--and please don't take this as an "I'm done with you" type thing--I just ask that you try a little more to make the changes I've been repetitively pointing out for several reviews now.

Rating:  4.5/10

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