I'm making my short story, guys! Here's a little demo of it:

Words. They can hurt. They can heal. They bring people together and break them apart. Some are wise in words and others are too dumb to speak. But there are certain words that bring a special bond into formation, like how burning metal turns into different objects. Those words can melt the inside, becoming something greater. However, those words never left my lips...it was stuck in my throats, never to reach the outside. I've tried so many times to speak but I choke up every change I got, pretending I caught something in my lungs. Days pass and many chances came about........until it was too late. That was the day I regretted not saying a word, not even a syllable.....

So.....that's just the beginning and it's not at first person all the time. What do you think?