Now should I tell you alittle bit about her?

Name: Lynn Xu
Age: 27
Eye Color: Purple (normally) with gold pupils if using her powers to the max
Birthday: March 3rd
Alas: goddness (in secret by lackeys) LynLyn (#1 councillors) Miss Detective Lynn (most people) White (Codename)

Ability: Read and touch peoples thoughts as words.

Backlash: Depending on how much Lynn uses abilities, it can go from slight tiredness to severe blood lost. (also may go out of control aka crazy for a little bit)

Likes: Sweets (lots of them) Freedom
Hate: Dull People, bitter stuffs, restrictions

Personality: Usually calm and layback, seems as if she doesn't take anything seriously. But in reality, she pays the most attention to the details. Always have a carefree smile on the outside, but frowns when in a bad mood. May seem like an impatient person on the outside, but in fact is the most patient person you may ever know. The type of person who Is careful of their words. When she feels not stable mentally, she usually likes to be alone. Called as a goddess within her lackeys in secret, because of her leadership. 

Brief Background (maybe not so brief-): Lynn came from a very strict family from Zhejiang, China, with 2 older brothers. Back in those days, it was wake up, get dressed neatly, study, eat, study, practice all kinds of class, then meet her parents for dinner. There was no freedom of choice at all. That was until one day, Lynn was 11, the house got mysteriously lit on fire. At the end, only Lynn survived, but she was never the same since. In the hospital, nurses called her mentally not right, while others just straight up called her crazy. Why? It was just because, she stares at them, but not at them at the same time. Her eyes shone as if she knew what they were thinking. But she never said anything. Her hands moving in a weird way at air and stares into space. But one day, she suddenly cheered up, and not long after. She disappeared when she is 16, and the day Lynn disappeared, the hospital mysteriously lit on fire and not a single life escaped. Coincidentally, it was on the same month and date, as the day Lynn's house got lit on fire as well. Soon, the secret organization, or evil cult called "Rose Ascetic" received the news of a new councilor. By then, there was already 5 councillors in the group. Because Lynn was the youngest, then, she is often underestimated. Because of the, she had a history of doing street fights. Then earned her rights and respect of her subordinates, respect within the councillors group. Created the biggest underground information network. Became a detective, and earned her respect within the police. All this happened with 11 years. Life was easy, until....

Trivia: 
Lynn is obsessed with sweets, it's a wonder how she hasn't gained any cavities.
Doesn't like to wear her detective hat, because of her ponytail.
The rose on her necklace, is proof that she is the "White" in the organization.
May seem like a very messing person, but she is in fact not that bad.
The only thing she can cook is basic western styled food.

Okok... that took longer than I thought- but ok

What do y'all think? I'm pretty happy with it!!

I wish I could show y'all the progress- but Wattpad doesn't allow mp4s.

Oh and also-what do you think @Actoroffoxes ?