I've been spending like 5 hours on this drawing and it's still not finished but so far I'm proud of it

yeahhhh so it was based on Japanese harajuku street style. I was just looking through some and I saw one and just wanted to draw it. :P I'm still having troubles w/ the photo

anyway how do y'all like it?

hate it?

love it?

I wanna hear your opinions

peace out ~

Update:

I finished it

can y'all give her a name? 
I'm not creative