This is for my class writing assignment please tell me if its good!

My writing assignment is to write if my parents asked me if i could go to any country (or state)where will it be! I chose Florida! This is a persuasive writing!

          Recently, my parents told me we were going to move and I could choose what state. The state I chose was Florida. I chose Florida because of Disney Land, Beaches, and the food! So lets begin.
           To begin with, Disney land. So we all know Disney land is in Orlando, Florida and other places but in North Carolina Florida is closer to where i live. Ive never been in disney land and im sure its fun! I always wanted to ride the rides!
           Second,  the beaches. There are so many beautiful beaches in Florida. I like to going to beaches and the sand feels soft on my feet. There are many sights to see at the beach in Florida and my family love going to beaches! Going to the beach mean my little sister and I get along! Also, i wont be stuck on my device! Win-Win!
              Lastly, food! I've been researching about Florida and i found out that Florida is known for their Oranges and that united states gets oranges from Florida! I was shocked because i love oranges and so does my family! There is also restaurants i haven't been too and its easily to find new restaurants there!
                  In conclusion, Disney land, the beaches, and food are my 3 reasons why i want to go to Florida! I hope i can get my parents to wanna move to Florida! Well i hope you enjoy my writing and 3 reasons why!

If you find a mistake tell me!!!! THIS IS DUE TOMORROW! TODAY IS MAY 11, 2017!!!!!