Title: Shining Behind Mirrors

Author: Ainu Haruka

Find it at: XToxicXoxo43

Fanfiction: Tokyo Ghoul and Black Butler

Characters: Matsuki Kuniko, that's the name that Yoshimura gives her after she applies for a job at Antieku without a name. She later says to be called Selena, not sure why though. Honestly, I like her character. She has a kind of 'bow to no one' kind of attitude, she only respects people. Also, I agree with the fact that cats are just great. The only thing I don't like is how she calls herself superior all the time, but that would make a reality check really sweet. Like a slap in the face. Honestly I love sweet sweet character development. I don't have much to complain about with your character though, so good job.

Plot: I'm honestly a bit confused as to what is going on most the time. She's interfering with canon events, but at the same time, also not changing anything. In my opinion, it would be more interesting if you messed with the canon plot of Tokyo Ghoul. I myself didn't like messing up the plot in my own works for the longest time, mainly because I didn't know what to do. But stepping outside of your comfort zone and changing up the plot is what makes a fanfiction unique! So many fanfictions are cliche because the OC charater doesn't change anything by very much. Good for you for doing a crossover though! I know it's fun to do those as I've done quite a few myself! Have fun with it!

Writing: The writing needs a bit of work. There are some grammatical errors here and there, but the paragraphs are what bothers me above all else. With Wattpads formatting, don't bother with indentation, it may look good on desktop, but it definitely doesn't look good on the mobile app. Also, space things out a bit more; separate thoughts and actual dialogue. If a new character is speaking, be sure to change the line to a new line. Also, be sure to not drag things along too much, there were times where things were super slow, and that can make your book boring or hard to read. Don't take it personally, but there were some boring parts.

Notes: Honestly with a bit more revising and hard work it will be a great story! I wish you well with it! The only thing that I didn't like above all else was the paragraph and dialogue errors, but with practice those are an easy fix!

And here are my ratings:

Characters: 3/5 shurikens

Plot: 3/5 shurikens

Writing: 2.5/5 shurikens

My overall rating: 3/5 shurikens

A/N

Remember to request any story that is yours or just one you like and I will read and review it! For a list of all the fanfictions I will review please go to the first chapter of this book! Remember that I am busy with writing and other things, so depending on the length of your book I will not get to the review right away.

I have not seen BNHA yet! So for the time being, I will NOT be reveiwing BNHA fanfictions!

(Also, sorry about how long it took to finish this!)

Edit: it appears the book has been unpublished, I do not know why as of now. Sorry, but the book cannot be added to my reading list or read.