Username: StrikingSorrows

Rater: missace123

Username: 3.5/5

Your username is very intriguing, in my opinion! The word 'striking' has an air of mystery to it, and with the alliteration of 'sorrows', it passes off as a fascinating username! However, I am unable to give you a higher score as I am unsure of the origin of the name. Usernames, from my perspective, should reflect on the user, and I am unable to find the connection between any other pieces of information given on your profile.

Display Name: 4/5

Your display name, I assume, is your real name. I find it pretty cool how you feel comfortable with putting your real name out there, something which many (including myself) feel uneasy about doing. I praise you on that! My only negative remark is that I wish it could be linked to the username.

Profile Picture: 5/5

You constantly show your love for wolves on your profile, and this is the first step! Not only is the photo related to one of your interests and books, but the image itself is quite enchanting! This really supports your interest in wolves, and almost seems like an unconscious promotion to the Lightsong Series. 

Header: 4/5

I actually found the header similar to your profile picture. The image is crystal clear and captivative, and it contrasts the profile picture nicely, but doesn't clash with it. Despite that, what made me lower the score for this category was the fact that the image of a galaxy, like your username, seems unrelated to the rest of your profile.

Bio: 3.5/5

Your bio gives plenty of information about you, however in my opinion, some of the information is irrelevant.

I enjoy how you list your books, supported with emojis, as it adds some brightness to your very long bio. You also list how frequently you update, which is great for regular readers as they are able to roughly deduct the times you publish a new chapter rather than pondering whether you're going to update or not.

As I've stated above, I feel as though some of the information you've given (e.g. whether you like maths or not) seems very out of place, and feels more as though you're ranting. There's also quite some negative remarks, which isn't the spirit Wattpad encourages. This makes your introduction quite excessive and almost unenjoyable as few are willing to read that much. Another point that I'd like to make is that you switch between paragraphs and bullet points, whereas you should only stick with one format.

Location: 5/5

Similar to your display name, it's quite a daring thing to put an actual location onto Wattpad or any social media platform in general. I also enjoy how you've added 'USA' behind, as some people still believe that Pennsylvania is a fictional place for horror stories. 

Book Covers: 5/5

I love how your book series carries out a particular theme and they complement each other nicely. However, they use different styles and some of the covers look as though more effort has been put into them (I'm looking at The Dawning), however it could also be viewed as a way you've grown as a graphic designer (presuming that you made the covers).

Reading Lists: 5/5

Your reading lists are fantastic! They have a clear difference between each reading list and no books seem to be in the wrong list. They've also been ordered from most to least likely viewed reading lists from other Wattpadders, which is nice to see! My only suggestion is to add another purple heart emoji before the wording "Other Books" as your other two reading lists have their respective emojis before and after the reading list's title.

First Impression: 8/10

Your profile overall is quite impressive! Some areas, such as your reading lists and profile picture are the epitome of perfect, or near-perfection at the very least! I was blown away with how creative you were with your Lightsong covers, as they all share similar properties, yet are unique in their own way.

I think that with a little tweaks, mainly with your username and bio (big changes, I know), your profile could really up its game and become a showstopper!

OVERALL SCORE: 43/50

Overall, your profile is truly amazing! It's professional and charming at the same time, and as I've stated above, if you were to do some minor changes, it would become even better!