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Rating by Ace: Paulablazing

Username: Paulablazing

Rater: missace123

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Username: 3.5/5

'Paula' seems to be your first name, which is perfectly fine, but 'blazing' for me is hard to understand. It may be a nickname, but I think that if your username was 'Paulajames' or something similar to that, it would make more sense.


Display Name: 4/5

I'm assuming that 'James' is your surname. It's really cool yet a daring thing to do because not many Wattpadders these days put their actual name as their display name for privacy purposes. I admire you for that, so well done!


Profile Picture: 4/5

I'm not sure whether this is a photo of you or not, but I'm sure that it is. Once again, you've shown that you're not afraid to show your true self on social media, which is a really nice thing to see!


Header: 2.5/5

I'm sure that the header was meant to be a picture of yourself, however Wattpad enlarged the image to only make your neck showing, so I think that you should change it. Also, I think that finding a landscape image is more suitable for the header.


Bio: 3/5

Your bio is quite short yet gives quite some information about you. I think what is most troubling for me is your use of punctuation and emojis.

One of your ellipsis has five dots instead of three, so please make sure you revise that. Also, "i'm" is incorrect because the "i" should be a capital letter. And finally, make sure that there's a space after each comma.

Emojis meanwhile, I feel as there is too much. By just limiting to one or two emojis per paragraphs should be effective.

And finally, you do not need to put your Facebook username in your bio since it's already linked below. 


Location: 4.5/5

This is a much stronger element of your profile, since it shows your love for Spongebob and lightens the mood. There's nothing else much to say, except that "bottom" should have a capital 'B'.


Book Cover: 2.5/5

Your cover could really use some work. Instead of having a girl texting with unflattering fonts and colour as the title, I suggest you to find a vector image of a phone and put the title within the screen to show texting. Also, make sure that you use the right size so that nothing is cut off when uploaded.


Reading Lists: 4.5/5

I really enjoyed looking at your reading lists! They are perfectly categorized, and I think the only part you should change is to group all of the book clubs into one reading list instead of two separate lists.


Website Link: [no score -- not added to final score]

I can't judge this since you don't have a link, but you do have your Facebook profile linked, so well done!


Theme + Colour Scheme: [no score -- not added to final score]

You didn't really have a theme or colour scheme, but I enjoyed how open you seem with your profile!


First Impression: 7/10

Some parts of your profile were weak, whilst others were strong, which balanced it out quite nicely. As I've already mentioned, I love how open you are about yourself— you're not afraid to hide much and you're quite honest about it! However, I feel as though you should interact with other Wattpadders that comment on your message board to keep the same attitude. 


OVERALL SCORE: 35.5/50

Overall, your profile was quite laid-back yet somehow attractive. I think your profile is between professional and relaxed, and with a little bit of revision, it could have such great potential! Keep up the great work!

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